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in this short story, Scootaloo tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders about her family and how she lost them in a terrible way...

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Comments ( 13 )

Not a bad story. Short and simple, yet with just enough to keep the reader entertained throughout the whole thing, in my opinion. Excellent job.

Comment posted by MarlonCalpe4000 deleted Mar 5th, 2021
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Comment posted by Bluecatcinema deleted Mar 5th, 2021

I like this story, but personally, I think it could have used some more detailed descriptions throughout (mainly for emotional appeal).

Comment posted by Estee deleted Mar 5th, 2021
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Comment posted by Luna Aeterna Solutae deleted Mar 5th, 2021

Oh, I've finally decided my future lies
Beyond the yellow brick road

Good luck with writing! :pinkiehappy:

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