in this short story, Scootaloo tells the Cutie Mark Crusaders about her family and how she lost them in a terrible way...
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Not a bad story. Short and simple, yet with just enough to keep the reader entertained throughout the whole thing, in my opinion. Excellent job.
I like this story, but personally, I think it could have used some more detailed descriptions throughout (mainly for emotional appeal).
Good luck with writing!
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