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Twinsez


Writing is a lot like life. It depresses the hell out of me, but I still go on with it for some weird reason.

Comments ( 10 )

Oh. Oh my.

I like it. Sorry I haven't more to say about it.

Wait... what happened?

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From what I could tell, the narrator's "love" died in the alleyway from her injuries, and (s)he's refusing to accept it.

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The narrator is a he, right? The one he’s speaking to is a mare.

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I couldn't find anything that directly referenced the narrator's gender. Their lover is definitely female, though.

EDIT: I was wrong; there's a line where the narrator calls his past self a colt.

"Our Love will never end" .....For all other things we have mastercard.

After rereading this and letting it sink in, all I can say is- It's not necrophilia if you are in denial.

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It is stated that the narrator is a colt.

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Oh, now I see it. I must've missed that line the first go-around. Thanks for the clarification!
:)

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