• Member Since 2nd Feb, 2021
  • offline last seen March 25th

Colbbie


I didn't screw it up, did I?

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As a middle-aged unicorn stallion working day and night in Cloudsdale as an artist, everypony knew I needed a vacation. And that was just what I thought I was getting until fate decided to play a cruel trick on me and give me anything but a relaxing vacation down by the sea by introducing me to someone who would change my life forever, under the sea.


Hope you like it, I kind of needed a break from my other story.
Comments and criticism are greatly appreciated and help me make the story better.
Cover Art Used (I erased the words)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

I relished in the relief

To relish is the same as to like. You don't like in things. You can revel in things if you really like them, but you can't relish in things. That mistake is really common on this site and for the life of me I can't understand why. I never see it anywhere else.

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Thanks, I guess I learned something new today. It's been corrected.

hotels/motels also don't use the number 13 it assigning numbers to their rooms they believe it to be bad luck

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I wonder why he got 13...

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it feel like your making fun of me now

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Sorry if it came off like that.

Well Buck!, I hope he’s not dead!

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Will he ever turn back into a Land Pony?
Because he’s a Shark Pony know.
I’ll guess I have to what for the next chapter.

Awe...
She’s so cute!

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