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Matthais Unidostres


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With the immense power gained with her new role as Equestria's sole princess, Twilight Sparkle has also received the ability of foresight Celestia had held for so long. However, Princess Twilight's power to see into the future is far stronger than Celestia's ever was. She has seen visions of the world over a thousand years into the future, where the pony world of Equestria has lost its magic. Friendship and Harmony have been replaced by paranoia and mistrust, and Ponies now live separated by species. Everything she and her friends had worked for would inevitably be eroded away, erased, destroyed, and made futile. This knowledge rocked Princess Twilight to her core. The idea that everything she had ever worked would be rendered meaningless was almost too painful to bear. And so, in her grief, she came to a decision.

If she could not change the future, she would kill it.

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FRICKIN Seriously?! WHY would Hasbro do this?! Wouldn't it be better if G5 was a Alternate Universe to our Loveable G4! Or if it was the Past itself with the Pony Tribes!


Because, it wouldn't make sense to have the Main Six's Achievements be forgotten like garbage!!!!! This is a FRICKIN slap to the face on every G4 Fan here!!!!!!! :twilightangry2:

P.S. Also "No Magic"???!!! WHY????!!!!!

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You uh... you a little salty there bud?

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If you read the story, you know why I'm upset. :ajbemused:

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I... I did... and I guess I don't...

I hate to break it to you, but this show's happening no matter what. Denying it won't change a thing.

(Also, this isn't Twilight, it shares a name and a face with her but it isn't her. And....... oooooh, I just continued reading. This is a parody isn't it?)

To forever cling to the old and shun the new is to embrace stagnation. Time marches on regardless; one must follow or be left behind.

Mind you, this is why Spike needs to appoint more Twilight supervisors. She may rule the country, but that doesn't mean she can be left to her own devices for too long.

Good stuff. A little melodramatic at times—when Twilight Sparkle sounds like a JRPG villain, you've cranked the prose a little too purple—but a nice approach to the generational transition.

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I haven't heard or seen a single thing that confirms this exists in the same timeline other than theories.

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The story has a happy ending.

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Ignore him. G5, from what little we know so far of it, is doing everything he doesn't like in a story.

Yeah. Equestria regressing into pre Hearth's Warming Eve thinking, makes no sense at all.

But at least wait till we actually have anything at all in the way of show Canon, before we shit on it.

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Yeah, I will admit it took me a minute for what the actual plot was to set in and when I realized I started laughing. It fools you a little, so uh... job done?

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I mean like... forgive me for actually discussing a positive opinion about anything new here, but...

The movie appears to be a significant time into the future. From what we have seen the Mane 6 are still idolized (if the MC is anything to go by). And like... I kinda like the idea of the three tribes being hostile towards one another and then this small group of ponies fight to bring back "the Equestria that used to be?"

Kinda compelling plot imo.

...okay, wow. Just...wow. And I mean that in a good way.

I'll be brutally honest; I was prepared to be really harsh. I was prepared to label this as fan wangsting, as an even greater mangling of Twilight than anything even the writers could come up with. But then I kept reading, and your point became clear.

And wow, am I glad this was written.

Good job.

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Hey pal, calm down. Time is a cruel mistress, things change that is beyond magic. I mean nothing stays the same forever, I mean looked at the Steven Universe Movie, remember Steven stopped changing when he got his happily ever after. Every story has an ending and a new story isn't sometimes a sequel.

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Especially that Sunny has like a merch of the mane 6 in her room.

So might get to see them.

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Hasbro chose to make G5 into a sequel because the world of G4 was far grander than the worlds of G1-3. It's hard to make a world for a story, but for a show about colorful horses meant for little girls, you're allowed to make it very simple. Which is why the first three generations of MLP had an easier time with reboots.

Lauren Faust however, created the complex world of Equestria for G4. And as the show went on, Equestria became even more complex. The more complex it got, the harder it became to let go. Had G4 ended in Season 3, G5 might've been a reboot. But that's just my opinion.

Awww, Twilight didn't blow it to smithereens.

Twilight went into this like:

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Seriously though, I thought this was a good read. I for one am eager to see what G5 will bring to the table.

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It's a good opinion too.

I'm a bit disappointed she didn't go through with it.

Mostly because it means that she decided on this plan because she was emotional about it all.

If she really seriously thought mercy killing the world was for the best, she would have let nothing dissuade her.

Someone this fickle about something this serious shouldn't ever have the power to do that.

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Don't bad mouth JRPG villains. You want Sephiroth to show up and cut you in half.
I'm joking. The melodrama was kinda intentional. How would you react if you were shown that your life and everything you ever did was meaningless?

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Thank you. I'm glad you understand the point of the story.

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Did you read the author's notes?
Also, Sunny and Izzy literally became immortal through the Magic of Friendship. I'm pretty sure that would be enough to shake Twilight's determination.

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I did; I'm not saying I agree with the plan, I'm saying that's not the sort of plan a person should enact unless they're 100% sure.

With the Bell boosting that up to 110%, even those two shouldn't have shaken her resolve enough to stop her.

That it did says to me that she started out actually going about performing the steps to kill the world, when she was less than 100% sure about it, which is what I find objectionable.

Twilight's wings flared out, and she shouted back, "You have no idea what my friends and I have been through! How hard we've fought! The dangers we've face! How hard we all worked! We united the world, and brought Equestria into a golden age. And how am I rewarded?"

okay I do felt like reading the summary of the G5 movie it kind of feels like this is an angry respond to Hasbro of this decision they were going with this story and everybody has their opinion about this and I'm also kind of worried about it as well

Wow Ok then so Twilight basically use grogar bell and took some of the chaos Magic from Discord to travel into the future and when she got there she basically wanted to obliterate this future because she believes that this is beyond saving but then there was a earth pony name Sunny and she was asking why she here and why is she doing this apparently Twilight was ranting about that all the powers that she has to bring peace to Equestria and and all the sacrifices she done and even her friends did for this world feeling that everything they done was nothing so she wanted to destroy this but Sunny wants to tell her there is another way to save this future but she refused to listen so she had to confront her then Twilight shot her magic at her thinking she made a mistake of hurting her but in the nick of time another pony named Izzy save Sunny's life in Twilight was pretty surprised to see a unicorn being friends with an earth pony and does magic around them but she still feels like it's not enough so she was going to continue on destroying this world but she couldn't she didn't want to become a killer of this world but somehow the two ponies hugged her and despite everything they forgave her and they still want to make a better way for the future even if it looks bleak there's always another way to save it and Twilight trust these two that they can make a difference

Ok I read the discrimination but WHAT?!
She’s going to kill it!!!

Holly Cow that made me cry 😭
I like this theory a lot

Ok know I’m curious
What would happen if twilight was crying in the park
And all the creatures noticed her?
And ask why she said and than try to destroy the world and than every creatures realize their mistakes their ancestors have done to Princess Twilight and try to fight her off to change her mind and something like that?
That would make it interesting 🤔

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In the last episode of G4, Hasbro closed the book, the G4 is over and time passes then first then they would die with all the other characters and then? I liked the G4 but sooner or later things end, they don't last forever and friendship is the same, some friendships end and others start then who knows maybe there was a really strong villain that others didn't succeed to defeat that now friendship and magic has disappeared then considering that in the last chapter as adults they are "retired" it is not up to them to continue to protect friendship, future generations must protect it as the tree said to the young six

I'll say, it was a surprise to see that everything Twilight and her friends worked so hard for was ultimately for naught. Though, I imagine time had something to do with it. One thousand years is a long time, time for friendships to fade, alliances to break, wars to be waged, good and bad choices to be made. Stuff like that. The Roman Empire eventually fell, didn't it?

Why Twilight was not there to guide Equestria during that time, the same way Celestia did, that's a mystery. But I have one theory. Twilight was born mortal, thus she had mortal principles. How do you think someone gifted the power of immortality would handle everyone they cared about dying around them, their friends and family crumbling to dust while she alone remained? Twilight likely learned the price of immortality, and it wasn't one she could pay. Driven mad by grief, she likely took her own life or disappeared off the face of the map, leaving Equestria to fend for itself. As for why Celestia and the other alicorns didn't return to clean up the mess, I do not know.

There are so many questions with few answers. I don't think we'll ever get a straight answer to what happened. I think the only plausible answer we have is that time moved forward and the winds of change took their course.

This is a great story, it portrays Twilight in a similar way to the Doctor in "The Waters of Mars".

They both fight for peace, they both fight for life, but it seems that the universe itself is fighting against them. What Twilight is doing here sounds very much like the "Time Lord Victorious" that the Doctor was turning into in that episode.

The Doctor was brought to his senses by Captain Adelaide Brooke killing herself to maintain the timeline. Twilight was brought to her senses by Sunny and Izzy's friendship (or more).

Twilight's magic flared up, her horn and Grogar's Bell both pulsating with magic, "With visions showing how EVERYTHING that we did, EVERYTHING we've ever worked for, would mean ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! It would've been bad enough if the world would have simply gone back to the way it was before the Elements of Harmony were rediscovered, but NO! It was going to be even worse than that! Earth Ponies, Pegasi, Unicorns. . .they would be split apart and segregated as they had been before the very first Hearth's Warming Eve! Before the very founding of Equestria itself!"

Just wait another 3000 years and they'll be even more segregated in their own space habitats with their own Dyson sphere.

Besides, it's definitely better than before the founding of Equestria:
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If it does then the tag Tragedy should NOT be there.
The characterization of Twilight n the first half is awful.
On top of that it’s FULL of spelling error.
Nope, definitely nope.

hows it feel knowing discords back?

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