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PrinceOfDarkness


I like Anon A Miss stories. My favorite characters are Princess Twilight and Sunset Shimmer.

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dang man. talk about a crazy but good opener.

Eldorado
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There's no pony in the published chapter here. There needs to be MLP relation at the time of submission. You'll have to publish the second chapter before you resubmit.

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I know, it's meant to be suspense to excite the reader for what happens next.

Eldorado
Moderator

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You misunderstand me. In order for the story to even be allowed to be posted here, pony content must be present at the time of submission. Which means both chapters need to be published.

You don't need pony in the first chapter, but you need it present somewhere when the story is submitted. You cannot submit a story to this website without pony in it, regardless of whether or not you intend on adding it later.

It's worth mentioning that there's not a lot of "suspense" to be built when the audience already knows that pony is coming at some point. But, if you want to cliffhanger anyway, that's fine, you just need to submit the story with the next chapter also published so those who want to go right into the pony content that follows are able to do so.

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A pony is mentioned in the 2nd chapter I just published. Princess Celestia and Luna.

sweet but way to fast paced.

So sad and sweet at the same time

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I know.
It's based on the scene from the 1980's RoboCop movie where RoboCop begins to remember dying as himself, Alex Murphy.

Eventually the scientists will find a way to earth but Kyle will go full Terminator mode on their asses, i.e using the liquid metal and nanotech on his body and shape them into blades and guns. Then use said weapons to kill them.

A great story, one of the favorites I've read. Please keep uploading the other chapters, I need to see the end of this story. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks, his daughter is an almost identical clone to Fleur. Biologically that is.

It'll be updated tomorrow.

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Who would be interested for the next chapter where a bunch of the human scientists, nicknamed "doctors" found a way to Equestria, tried to kidnap Fleur, Kyle and their daughter.

During said kidnap, they threaten and try to torture the child and Fleur, causing Kyle's human mind to accept and merge with his mechanical and AI side, becoming a true hybrid.

In said state, his morality, emotions and everything else in his mind are shut down, but with the merge of the AI a new command activates in his brain.

[OBJECTIVE: KILL SCIENTISTS, PROTECT AND RESCUE FAMILY]

[ACTIVATE PHASE PLASMA RIFLE AND HANDHELD M2 BROWNING MACHINE GUN]

[PLASMA AND AMMO ROUNDS UNLIMITED]

After killing every single scientist Fleur and his little filly manage to calm him down and wake up the human part of his mind.

Who would like to see that happen?

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