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Just as the title says. There's all sorts of adventures children can get into when they're in the tub! I thought of this while I was taking a bath...

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Very Cute:twilightsmile::moustache:

We want Princess Celestia to bathe us every time!

Awk out of context. :trollestia:

That was cute. I like that you at least acknowledged that somepony like Princess Celestia would "raise" children with the help of servants. She has a country to run, after all.

LOL so cuite:derpytongue2:

Awwww, that was adorable! :twilightsmile: I like little one-shots like that. That helped make my evening, thank you and great work!

I expect it might hit the Feature Box.

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG :heart:

The Cuteness, It wounds me
D'awwwww

Cryssy, this is the kind of stuff you write that always warms a dead man's heart. These little one-shot, slice-of-life stories about Twilight as a filly. Thank you once again! You're still one of my favorite authors on here.

Dawww this was great :twilightsmile:

1217631 I hope it hits EQD once I sent id. But that would be awesome. Let me know if it does--off to work! :B

1217631 Furthermore, does anyone have any idea how the feature box works? Do writers suggest a fic to the admins? Because there's a few fics I want to see hit the feature box

1218300
Depends on how fast it gets likes and faves.
For example. 100 faves and 100 likes within a minute get you to feature box.
Look at Wanderer D. :twilightsmile:
Fully automated.

1218313 OHHH....I see. So it's automated! Darn, I wanted to suggest a few fics I've read. Hm, I'm still submitting it to EQD once my editor runs through c:

I think my favorite thing about this was the perfect way it encapsulated a child's ability to turn anything into a game and make it epic.

I can't offer any suggestions or a critique for this. Good flow, grammar, style, characterizations, idea, and execution. There was enough humor and DAAWWWborable to keep it "flavorful."

I think you may have hit upon something here if you were looking to continue the story. "The Misadventures of Twilight & Spike" perhaps? :twilightsmile::moustache:

Anyway, favorited and thumb'd up. Good work!

1218379 I was thinking of continuing this little series...and I was considering naming it that. How on earth did you--get out of my heaaaad!!!!! :twilightoops:

But thank you, that is what I was going for. A Child's imagination is just endless, even little Twilight. before she prefers to keep things "practical". *giggle*

1218387
Better idea. Write next story as new chapter and see if you see if it fits. If it does, mark this story as Incomplete and add chapters.
Win-win! :pinkiecrazy:

1218402 Ha, it does! c: And I can just change the name of the fic! That's a good idea

1218409
Why over-complicate things? Make it simple! :pinkiehappy:
Simple solutions!

1218387

I'm psychic, what can I say. :pinkiecrazy:

Honestly, whether this matters or not, but this story does prove you have enough "grasp and creative license" to pull it off and make it brilliant. Keeping such a broader story in mind, it felt like I was reading a chapter from such a story. Again, good work! :scootangel:

D'awwwwwwww :derpyderp1:

Loved it!

must...resist...urge.....to..........D"AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::heart::heart:

Awwww. This is so cute! :twilightsmile:

People should write about filly Twily and spike playing more often. :heart:

D'aaww levels: fatal.

:derpytongue2: Bubbles!

Very cute and quite entertaining.

Write on! :twilightsmile:

:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay: 5/5 adorable-ness!

Great job!

I liked the etory but with kids myself the only thing i could think was how irresponsible celestia was leaving a toddler in a full bathtub with out an adult. Kids can drown in that

Read this awhile ago and decided to seek out all the adorable Filly Twi/Baby Spike stories that were utterly adorable. They really should be in my favorites.

2088937 Everything in life is wonderful when you have filly Twi and baby Spike :rainbowkiss:

That was pretty cute.

Is there a club for Baby Spike?

A bit like Eloise Takes A Bawth, (my least favorite Eloise book), but better

That was adorable! :twilightsmile:

And from that day forth, much to Future Twilight's dismay :facehoof:, Princess Celestia had the adventures of Captain Sparkle Pants and her trusty First Mate Patchy the Dragon immortalized in the halls of Canterlot

:trollestia:

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