Not to downplay the amazing writing, which it was, but.......nice. 69100 words

I liked the story.

If it’s any condolence, I still look back at your older works and find that those stories are just a wonderful as the first time I read them.

Awesome story, I think Spilight is an underrated ship, keep on writing man

This was a wonderful, heartbreaking story and I enjoyed it greatly. The tension between Twilight and Spike was well done. Seeing Spike be the strong one in this relationship and Twilight as the shy, neurotic mare was just as they've always been...but even more intense here. Twilight has always known Spike cared deeply for her but just couldn't accept being loved, until she realized that she might lose him. Being vulnerable and weak give them the strength to love. Just a fabulous look at what true love really is like. Thanks for a great tale!
And as most everyone knows, best friends make the best lovers!

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Hehehe!

I've been waiting for someone to comment about that.
~ Yr. Pal, B