The first human to appear out of the blue was Claudia. Princess Twilight Sparkle and Starswirl the bearded aren't expecting for a human with tannish skin to appear out of nowhere and this lady don't appear to be magic at all. Claudia never seen mythical creatures exists but just in stories and movies, she pleaded to be sent home, but it took them three months to finally able to find a spell to bring back to where she came.
Alogn that three months, she grew fond with ponies, and other creatures she gotten to know. she decided to stay with the permission of both Twilight and Starswirl. She became the first human resident of Equestria.
But now, 4 years past, there were rumours of another sightings of humans not far from Ponyville.
Chapters (13)
So she appeared at the same time as starswirl?
What’s the peace amulet?
Will we get information about her old home?
They’re eating ponies?
What kind of magic can she do?
Will we get to see the new land?
Why did she say human like that?
What’s Maretonia?
Why is she upset?
You mean only twilight?
What does she need a cloak for?
Gallus is that strong?
Sorry about the long comment, but I feel like information got shoved into my head too quickly.
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OH... Oh geez that's a lot. Okay first of all thank you the comment. I love it. ahhaha,, would you believe this is all just pop in my head an i just wrote this fiction out of my whim without actualy plan?? but as i finished chapter
okay to answer the questions (also wow i didn't know you can actually take a quote from the story and do that):
1) Actually no, She appeared Probably a few more years after the pillars reemerged (she is in the time at the end of Season 9, imagine like 2 months after the whole end episodes)
2) I imagine a peace amulet being only used for peace related stuff, i don't know how to explain because I didn't think this through much thought the purpose of Peace Amulet is just a symbol for Claudia being someone who just never liked war and such and she tried to solve any deal before things gets ugly, she can stop anypony fights as soon as possible and do some couseling. Sorry, maybe i will try my best to do more story based on the amulet.
3) I plan to make a Prequel for that once this Story is over.
4) No. You will know in next Chapter
5) With the amulet, she basically only can do lifting things, transportation spell, barrier spell and tiny spell that don't require too much energy,
6) Maybe in a few chapters, or in the Prequel. :) I will see which works better to show them lands. (i need to study more on Equestria maps )
7) Because she was unsure, if it really humans, might be just a wild imaginations like maybe its another creature... probably Bigfoots. (Since Yeti exists in that world)
8) If I'm right it's one of the lands in Equestria who only appeared once in the series. I forgot which episode but it's that one episode Where twilight sing with the princessses "You'll Play your part" song.
9) 4 years living in pony lands, you might just have pretend you are a pony yourself. She honestly anxious with the words Humans and she couldn't handle being with human ((she is a bit of a biganti social at hom but in Equestria she changed) Though when she got this news she was feeling 50/50 on it.
10) This was a sentence error that i sadly didn't realize it was wrongfully arranged. The peace amulet is just something SIMILAR to what Twilight and her friends used to wear but this one is different entirely from that Elements of Harmony. Hope you understand what im saying but can ask a bit more i love answering questions and like make notes of my writing mistakes. :D
11) because She love Starburst and Starswirl's cloak and she really think it's cool. she just wants to look cool.
12) I imagine Griffon's all are strong and can carry heavy things if they want to. If a pony can carry carriages or heavy bags on their backs Griffons could carry a single (who maybe not too heavy) human on their back. LOL.
I hope i answered your questions properly. you can ask me again. I am happy to answer!
Also Chapter 2 is coming so there's that.
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Wow, interesting.
Yea. You can actually take quotes.
5. Oh. So just basic things.
8. Really?
9. Biganti?
10. So it’s similar, but different from the elements?
11. What does her cloak look like, then?
12. So I’m guessing Gallus is smaller than her?
Is the chapter coming out anytime soon?
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COol.
5) yes Basic things
9) EXCUSE ME I MEANT BIG ANTI. I HATE MY TYPOS UUURGH,
10) YES. very diffferent. it doesn't do like big stuff the elements of harmony does but they actually havent actually look at the potential yet. Who knows it does act the same as the elements?
11) OOoo Imagine Sunburst's cloak but uglier. (rarity might cry seeing how ugly it is)
12) I imagine Gallus is like as big as a puma.
CHAPTER 2 is ready to publish right now but i might not doing that yet, i have to re read everything, then maybe in three hours i'll post them.
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10. What are some similarities and what are some differences?
11. So I’m guessing it’s probably one plain color?
12. Ohh.
Oh ok
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10) well, the only thing similarities this Peace Amulet is from the tree of harmony's essences i imagine for years the tree of harmony really just grow around instead just one place as a student's clubhouse. The peace amulet can be use slightly as a weapon like how Elements of Harmony works?
11) yes one plain color and just have tiny outline stars with no color.
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10. Based on the question mark at the end I’m guessing you’re not 100% sure?
11. That’s kinda gonna be hard to imagine.
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like i think i said before... This was written out of the blue. The amulet thing i still figuring out its whole story.
10) yes.
11) i probably will someday just draw it out to get a good picture on how she dress with the cloak someday.
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10. So the only similarity is that they come come from the tree of harmony?
11. That might be a good idea.
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10) yes.
11) maybe when i have time to sketch out one, i'll add some a little pic on the chapter.
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10. What about differences?
11. Cool
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10) the difference the peace amulet and the elements of harmony itself, is that this thing just looks like a locket with a small ruby on it rather than a necklace like how elements of harmony stuff looks like ((looking like the mane 6's cutiemarks)
In the cover art for this behind the girl (which is Claudia) thats how the Peace amulet looks like.
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Yup, that definitely looks like a peace necklace. So is that the only differences?
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Well there's also the thing the amulet acted like how the cutiemap calls for friendship problems? The amulet would blink like a car on alarm for Peace problem.
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Is that all the differences between the elements and the amulet?
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Yep. Hope i dont disappoints you with my answers.
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It’s alright. Thanks for answering them.
They wear clothes?
Is she that worried?
Where do they keep getting these cloaks from? Are they on sale?
Other camps?
Wasn’t she worried not that long ago?
Why is she asking them that?
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1) it's that type of ponies that wear shirts and all so there were clothes i guess larger than humans' clothes.
2) yeah sort of. Just a little worried.
3) Lmao more like they sew themselves out of materials they attacked. Maybe just used materials out of tents.
4) next chapter will have another part about this.
5) she was until she knows the ponies now are safe again and now she can focus on the humans that she couldn't believe exist in front of her eyes. She have mixed feelings though.
6) she just want to reconfirm if they actually came by like she did years ago.
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6. Does it matter how they got there?
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6) it matters to her and she have to make reports about it too for information to give to Princess Twilight.
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Ohh. Is that why she was hoping they got there from a blue light.
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Yeap~
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To make filling the report out easier?
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Yep
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Ohh.
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Im guessing Claudia ever since stayed in Equestria and being the only human there she do have make reports for each time she solve a problem to Twilight and this one might be her biggest report yet.
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O yea. The story did mention something like that, didn’t it?
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In Twilight's scroll to Claudia in first chapter. Yep.
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Really?
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Well Twilight ask Claudia to just pass her the news only not actual reports thats going to need more than just one book report. Though she would just be give report to Twilight face-to-face when she meet her in Canterlot.
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Oh ok. Now I get it.
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Hope i still help you with my very scrambled up story. I always scared people wont understand my writing or storyline.
Though im grateful for someone like you to come by and ask me questions. Never had people come to whatever i write and ask these questions.
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Thank you
You’re welcome
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Why does she have to? Seems unnecessary.
Grumpy old man.
Robe?
Thank god that they’re orphans.
Is she talking earth or canterlot?
I’m sorry, but I would not agree with that. I’m at least keeping a knife on me.
I wouldn’t say it’s that different.
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1) Claudia feels like she needs to.
2) yes. Yes he is.
3) argh dang it. I want to say cloak. Not robe. Will edit soon.
4) i swear i will be the one who feels guilty taking children that have parents ((unless one or them or the teens just had abusive parents))
5) Earth Earth not Pony Earth.
6) well probably someone in the group thibks like you and have kept a pocket knife.
7) Well thats definitely true, just theres no blasting car horns and tall buildings. The tallest one just be castles. Lol
All of the humans?
She has to bow to her?
They’re friends?
Is she not allowed to be there?
Could it have been the same human?
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1) ALL OF THE HUMANS.
2) just a simple curtsy. Twilight still royalty. must give a little respect.
3) Yes. She friends with a guard. again he is my OC as welll including Klutzy. Of course i had to make them friends.
4) Well, she suppose to not to without instructions. Though it's exceptional if something important needs to be done. like bringing a child to the toilet.
5) it could have been. later chapters might be around this little human. Who i still need to give a name.
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Ohh.
What does that mean?
Please tell me she wasn’t scared to ask that.
Is that what she sleeps in?
What was the comeback?
Classes?
But, what if they don’t wanna go back? Because, it would seem like a difficult decision varying from person to person.
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1) lmao in other word, they are surprised actually.
2) oh she's scared. she don't want to offend anyone.
3) Yeah. sadly. she didn't expect to be sleeping in the castle that day. so she didn't actually pack clothes... She only pack her amulet, cloak, and some money.
4) okay this part i dunno i myself not good at comebacks..... i guess i let the readers give a comeback?
5) In the past 2 years, Claudia actually teaches Human History and Biology. Back then she was really scared on giving big speech to a lot of people in an auditorium, though she gotten used to it as well. Imagine the first time she agrees to do a small open talk about Human she never expect it would be a lot of ponies and other creatures ready to learn. the first time she does it, a disaster.
6) That would be revealed in the next chapter, That's wy Twilight kept on telling Claudia to get to know the humans more just to get to know what their desire is. ((not sure if desire was the right word but yeah))
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3. So rarity didn’t make her any pajamas?
5. Wow, something tells me there’s a lot to this Claudia girl.
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3) Oh she did. just that yeah she forgot to pack.
5) 😁 heh, yeah. She's something.
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3. She forgot to pack it? Then, where did she live before the castle?
5. Any other things that need to be known about her?
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3) Well, it's in Twilight's castle you know the friendship caste next to friendship school.
5) The only thing you need to know she's really REALLY enjoys farming when she is not in Twilight's castle she would go to Sweet apple Acres to do some bucking... i mean plucking. For the past years, she actually works around town if she doesn't have Peace job to do. You could also say she earns quite amount of money to spent.
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3. Wait, she still lives in twilight’s old castle? Because the first chapter said she temporarily stayed there.
5. Do you mean picking?
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3) Ooops, okay i myself got confused with my story. Yeah temporary in twilight's. Her clothes most in that castle but others are in a small house she rent in middle of ponyville.
4) ah yes....Picking.
god, i forgot how to english at times.
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3. Ohh. I don’t think it mentioned that.
5. Happens to the best of us.
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3) Yeah I didn’t explain the rest of it in the first chapter. But I will put other details in later chapters too.
5) ayyy.