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Imagination Ideas is struggling to cope with her missing family and her depression. This leads her down the dark road of cutting and trying to end her life. Autistic Pony notices her and tries to stop her. Will his efforts prevent her from dying? If she does survive, who will support her?
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! Oh hey daughter :) forgot you write ^^’ :D
Although really wish you told me you were using my OC for a story first ^^’
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This was from two years ago, remember?
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Says was published two days ago
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It is a rewrite. Here is the original link to it: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/489270/1/broken-shards-a-rewrite/broken-shards-complete-story#comment/10689834
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Neat, will do! Sorry, Been busy with this one story that’s really been getting popular https://www.fimfiction.net/story/350494/looking-glass
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Don't worry about it, have fun.
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Oh like I won’t/soon/eventually ;p
Speaking of since I have you, not sure what kind of time and commitment you have, but working on something I’m just about soon going to make a big artist call for
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/938372/sunset-shimmer-little-mermaid-art-map
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Just don’t read the original, it had a lot of errors.
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Lol, well don’t stop improving XD
Reading now, and I see you still fall into the trap of telling more than showing what’s going on. Most would rather see a scene of where your OC’s going and let their actions show their feelings, rather then being told what you look like and simply how you’re feeling.
Not to say you can’t just say ‘she was feeling sad’ but I lot goes a long way... oh here!!
https://www.deviantart.com/zarxnos/art/Sunset-Shimmer-s-last-sunset-871464780
See how I wrote this scene in an upcoming fan fiction and see how I’m able to convey Sunset’s emotion without hardly having to say ‘she felt angry/sad.’
Brother? I thought I was your fandom dad 🧐
Regardless, unless you want me to get more gritty as in you want to become a writer, and for anything I could say; I do see it as marvelous improvements from the last one. It was a sweet self insert story
Originally from two years ago. I also portrayed the feelings of depression the way that I did to vent at the time.
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Will you help me rewrite it again?