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Timothy1509


I have been writing Twirax stories since 2019.

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Twirax, Screwball and Viper are three cheerful and amazing hybrid friends who are asked to take care of Alistair the young hybrid Changeling and Friendship prince while their parents head to the spa for the day. Will this be a nice and easy duty?

New story! I hope you all will enjoy this one too! This story will be a crossover of my friend TyrannosaurusVenom's story The King's Legacies. I hope you all will like it.

Also, I do not own Jurassic World or My Little Pony. Everything in this story belongs to their rightful owners.

And the art I am using belongs to my good friend Rhino932 Toon on deviantart.
Here's the link to it
https://www.deviantart.com/rhino932/art/Three-friends-babysitting-Alistair-870330261

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Twirax was told to babysit her little brother Alistair for the day while her parents have gone to the spa along with her uncle and aunts. She has agreed in joy of the request because, she loves her little brother so much that she never wants to leave his side. She has also asked her parents if she could invite Viper and Screwball along for the obligation, and her parents replied with a nod of their heads. That got her even more happy.

For the obligation?
That kinda makes it sound like he doesn't wanna be there.
Also, a bunch of the stories wording feels very out of place, like it was shoved in there on a whim.
other than that, I'm really liking the story! :pinkiehappy:

Nice job for Viper, Screwball and Twirax. I'm glad they watch over Alistair.

10682005
Thank you Chazkopa, thank you. And did you liked the mission impossible music?

10681991
Thank you so much!

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