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This story is a sequel to Perfect Game


After winning a championship, lonely extrovert Autumn Apple becomes empowered by her great accomplishment to finally fix the loneliness problem in her life.

By the outcomes of previous experiences, Autumn is not optimistic about this try, but little does she know, there’s a new resident in Appleloosa… might she be a candidate?


A collab with Player 4

Note #1: Perfect Game was written entirely by Player 4, but he and I are collaborating on this sequel and he wanted it to be on this account.

Note #2: This story, and the description below, contain spoilers of Perfect Game. It is not necessary to read that story in order to understand this one, but if you do intend on reading Perfect Game and don’t want spoilers, read that one first.

Note #3: Heads up y'all, Sparkler and Flappy are in this story. However, it has exactly two similarities between it and Sparkling Harmony, Sparkler and her history, and Flappy. Everything else is different. It's a completely different universe to Sparkling Harmony; note the "Alt. Universe" tag.

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Comments ( 61 )

Who's Flappy? The only Flappies I know are those things from Mega Man Battle Network.

He's Sparkler's parrot friend in Sparkling Harmony. I decided to bring him along because he's Sparkler's best friend.

even with being alt unverse, that the stallion here is called Bradford is ironic

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Different bradford than the one I told you about. Hehe

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I know but still, kinda ironic if you think about it. Plus, it could sound familiar to her

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Different Universe. For all you know the bradford I told you about doesn't exist in this universe.

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Of course, I just assumed her past is not very different from her original one

nice southern accent by sparkler at the end

LOvely!

Sparkler nodded. “Yeah. I also have no problem with loud noises.”

I have the same issue due to my handicap

lovely with the magic spells of sparkler

nice one. Though...since when does a parrot need toothpaste/brushing his teeth?

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Just something I thought could be unique to Saddle Arabian parrots.

good one on the ending!

I thought Sparkler was a canon character.

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That's a different Sparkler. Or Amethyst Star.

THIS Sparkler's full name is Sparkling Medley.

I was about to hit the hay and then this! nice job!

lovely job you both did there

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Shouldn't she be called Sparkling and not Sparkler, then?

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She likes the nickname Sparkler better.

lovely, nice work once again.,. really liked how autumn comforted sparkler

short but good! Poor Sparkler here..

thuigh, seceruiy bkanky and a plushie? NOt that i am complaining but...what is she, 5? and i can't remember her plushie was mentioned before

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it was.

And some poeple have that stuff. It's just a thing that comforts her in times of stress.

After winning a championship, lonely extrovert Autumn Apple becomes empowered by her great accomplishment to finally fix the loneliness problem in her life.

By the outcomes of previous experiences, Autumn is not optimistic about this try, but little does she know, there’s a new resident in Appleloosa… might she be a candidate?

Why do we need to click the "+More" button to see this?

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That's just what happened. The description was long enough that it was put in +more

Better later than never

Nicely done! But flappy cursing?

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What? You think he can’t?

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It just Looks untypical for him at first

i just decided that this is my favorite author and i love this story

"this is not good this is not good at all" oh my she finally knows the truth though am happy she did leave as that magic is dangerous

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Ya think? Look at Flurry when she sneezes in the show.

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