• Published 14th Feb 2021
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I -AM- My teenage daughter! - videomaster21XX



Hondo's life as "Honey Belle" The twin sister of Sweetie Belle begins!

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“Anyway it proves that I’ve had my fair share of bizarre incidents. I mean we do live in Ponyville after all. It’s not like we haven’t seen gender bender shenanigans before. Speaking of which I should ask Applejack how Gala’s twins are doing.” She tapped a finger on her chin before waving the thought away.

Well, this town is notorious as the Equestria's weirdness magnet. Ponies in this town really have strong mental fortress.

I can only hope that they don't met Applejack. There are just too many ways this could go wrong.

Aren't fanfics all just rp? I dig it.

10680179
Not sure I follow. What's wrong with Applejack?

10680392
Element of honesty. She will figure out that they are lying about Honey Belles origin and will force the truth out of them. Hopefully this will happen in a private setting.

10680397
10680392
Well, from what I recall from the show, Applejack has never been shown to be a living-lie detector in any way, and actually seems to represent Honesty in the more "Trusting others" sense, rather than just flat "Truth and Lies".

That, and I don't recall any episode where Applejack reacts particularly badly to lies or has a natural knack for sniffing them out. The only thing I can think of is that she's just a bad liar herself. It seems to be more a fandom thing that AJ is a natural counter to lies, which means it's only a problem if videomaster wants it to be. Which could be quite funny, what with the glares Applejack can give. I can just picture Honey sweating profusely under Applejack's searching eye. Still, doesn't have to be the case, and the other way could be funny too, Applejack popping into the story at some point and just falling for the story, then being all welcoming and hospitable, a bit like she was with Twilight.

10679753
Yes, yes they do. With enough time, fortunately and unfortunately, you can get used to pretty much anything...even the unexpected and crazy apparently. I suspect dear Pinkie Pie has helped with that, along with the more recent events with the Mane Six in general.

I look forward to what Sweetie Belle will say/how she'll react seeing Honey like this:ajsmug:

Also, very interesting turn of events, and I am particularly intrigued by Dinky noting it isn't Sweetie Belle by how her boobs feel. Considering the potion seems to have pretty much perfectly replicated Sweetie's body, that says to me that it isn't exactly any normal physical thing Dinky was feeling from Honey's boobies, and more something related to how the potion alters the body physically, perhaps some sort of extremely subtle, and likely near-meaningless, remnant of Hondo's body/fur that Dinky can feel due to her experience with Sweetie's and other fillies chests? Like, perhaps something not even masculine or magical in nature, but more how a pony's body feels after a certain amount of age, that still faintly exists in some way on Honey's body? One of those things that might be normal in other contexts, but here it stands out, at least to Dinky?

Yes, I know I'm crazy analytical like some mix of Twilight Sparkle and Izuku Midoriya, I know...though thankfully I am not as tightly wound, and leave it more speculative than hardline:raritywink:

10680424
Yeah, Dinky's thing with boobs is sorta a Pinkie Pie sense thing. In the fact it makes no sense. XD

10680700
Actually, I've seen two other cloppy fanfictions that that part reminds me of to be honest: This Lovely Aria by Slam-Manian, and Hard To Explain by ScousePone. The former because it also involves a character who has a rather oddly technical interest and "feel" (Tee-hee) for boobs, and the latter because it involves Sweetie Belle groping Scootaloo from behind, a bit like Dinky does to Honey Belle here:pinkiesmile: So yeah, it isn't quite as isolated as it might seem. Strange, perhaps, but not totally unheard of.

Anyway, I eagerly await the next chapter, you magnificent bastard!:ajsmug:

10680797
Oh I'm sure I'm not the only one to come up with it. I'm just saying for my story it's more of a "It's not suppose to make sense" kinda deal. :P

10680801
True, but I can roll with it well enough that it isn't much of a thing to me personally, and I can understand it well enough. Very good to see it though, especially where Dinky actually realizes just from feeling Honey's boobs that it isn't Sweetie Belle, then apologizes. I detail my thoughts on that in the comment that started this. To sum it up, it's pretty standard in my book, but also a very welcome and delightful tidbit in the story, and again, I look forward to more of whatever you've got in the next chapters!

I just have an unbreakable urge to hypothesize and comprehend the unusual things I run into, in real life and in fiction. It's my JAM!!:pinkiehappy:

Very nice story I really like where the story goes . I have an idea if you're looking for inspiration: Honey should take the place of sweetie bell one day when sweetie bell gets sick again. Honey says yes ... then let the chaos begin!

After an admittingly wonderful breakfast, they had set out to meet Rarity

Admittedly, not admittingly . . . . wait. That's actually a word?! Okay, I learned something today. Thank you!

10682291
And thank you for pointing out the spelling mistake!

What happened with Rarity and Winona?

10682562
They swapped bodies at somepoint, but to find out more, you'll have to wrestle it out of Rarity.

10682601
Well i hope we get to hear the story someday

"an… unique manner" you don't add the 'n' to 'a' in this case because 'unique' starts with a 'y' sound

Nice i kept hoping for a sequel, awesome story so far keep it up.

The only thing I can think to add in regards to who Cookie hooks up with is don't break their marriage and maybe retcon button knocking up Honey, and maybe instead have either have Cookie take the potion to mess with Hondo by turning herself into a Button Double or have Hondo get back to normal for them to finally have their romantic night only Hondo becomes 20-year-old Cookie and Vice versa.

I only suggest this since breaking their marriage seems like an unneeded and quite heavy action when it seems to me the easiest solution is to have Cookie knock up her husband.

But still, It is your story just wanted to get my two cents in and cant wait to see where it goes.

This was a fun and interesting chapter but
10692656 yes place don't split them up that's just sad.

I honestly think that they should just stop treating him like Hondo. He should be treated more like Sweetie's twin, and less like her dad. Also, I think a solution to the public not recognizing her could be solved through a simple memory spell, if that was really a problem.

10710950
A memory spell that affects the entire town? Twilight ain't going to let that happen. Also have to take into account if anypony is out of town that day. They're going to come home to wondering why people they know keep talking about this "Honey Belle" They've never heard of before.

It's just one of those times that using more magic to fix it, likely is a very bad idea.

10711261
Good point. But I still think she should be more accepting of her new life. Or at least more forced to act like it.

10711547
Problem is that goes down a slope I want to avoid.

If I basically have her brainwashed to be Honey, a lot of readers will likely not take kindly to that, and in the end just feels like it's being too mean to Honey.

Honey needs to figure this out for herself. We can't force her. We have to see what she in the end decides, and that means letting her break free of this if she so desires. The option to just end this has to be there for her. It's why I don't want to focus on her possibly being pregnant, because that leads to no way out, and I don't want that in Honey's journey.

10711605
All good points, I see what you mean.

10711605
I agree. To be frank I never liked pairing Transformation with Brainwashing(I like both well enough, but not mixed together). Making them forget who they used to be feel like it make the transformation pointless. The fun of it is in the struggle, the complex mess of feeling and the character changing through self discovery rather than magic.

Oh certainly do I wish for more of this. Poor Honey, no idea how long this is going to last you.

Will their be more??:rainbowhuh:

10917983
Yes, though I'm focusing on finishing "Cake Mix 2" First.

10886408
IF she ever goes back. Don't forget from the first one she has another little 'growing' situation :twilightsmile:

10918861
Hope so. I keep finding myself coming back time and time again to read both parts of this. The REAL fun though is when they discover just what that one time with Button gifted her with :twilightsmile:

So if Hondo is eighteen years old now as the story description says, how old was he when Sweetie was conceived? :derpytongue2:

10931603
Probably in his early 20's? You do understand that the magic that turned him into Honey Age Regressed him right? He was probably in his late 30's/early 40's before.

I'm really not sure what you are trying to imply with this.

10931929
I'm just joking that the description said he turned into an "eighteen year-old" when his new body is zero years old and he's obviously over 30.

good luck on more of this
i love following Hond-ney's story even if its heavy on the clop
sorry i just love the idea of a father or mother becoming a twin to their child
freaky friday did some weird stuff to me as a kid:twilightsheepish:

10986958
It will. Someday. Still want to finish Cake Mix 2 first.

Really wish I wasn't so burnt out after work all the time. I'm doing what I can for you guys.

We need spike to become a Rarity copy

Shit, Is this story dead?

I was really getting into it.

11190640
Not dead! Just delayed. I'm trying to finish up Cake Mix 2 as it's ending ties directly into this story.

And uh, I'm also trying to figure out a few things for Honey Belle to do in this story... ^_^;

11190648
Well I'm very happy to hear that!

Also I can't really complain too much about delays. I don't even want to THINK about how long it's been since I updated my own story...

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