Hondo never thought trying to surprise his wife with a younger body would have backfired so spectacularly that he'd end up as a SHE, and not just any mare, but a copy of his own daughter Sweetie Belle!
What's worse, as this eighteen-year-old girl, she's already had sex with Sweetie's boyfriend Button Mash!
How can that happen seconds after his transformation?
10678041 I rather say Cookie change herself into a Hondo duplicate and have her way with Honey. This way, Hondo become his own son-in-law. But wouldn't that count as incest?
If you wanna go fully bizarre, why not have rarity become Hondo for the day or something . So she/he can get together for some incest while also giving honey a daddy for the day
10678678 I was more thinking accidentally and then she just kinda roles with it. But if that's not really your thing then that's fine. Your fic after all.
10678685 Ah accidently makes sense, but yeah I'll be looking for a solution that avoids any FTM transformations. Partly because I like the idea of twin Rarity's to match my twin Sweetie's.
Of course Cookie could always end up looking like anyone or thing really. I just need something that seems fun. ^_^
Oh man am I excited seeing this! And then reading the description and it's implications makes me drool with anticipation, I fizzing love TF stories where the transformed (either through mental change or genuine acceptance) considers staying/does stay in their new form!! You have definitely got my hopes up for this sequel even more than the previous story did, videomaster!! Now, time to read this first chapter...
I don't like the idea of Hondo and Cookie splitting up how about them got ng back and forth of one of them being a girl and the other a male like Cookie turning into Spike Then back into younger versions of themselves
“Hey Honey.” Sweetie said weakly, giving a small cough. While she raised her hand to her face as she did so, Hondo noticed a strange green glow around her mouth. She knew that spell. It was a magic mask. Perfect for keeping germs from infecting those around her. Guess she wasn’t quite over the flu yet.
Or so she hoped.(—— She had no idea how long this was supposed to last, and it was already being dragged out longer than she thought.
“Hey, you owe me more than this after what you did yesterday!” Sweetie shot back while picking up Honey’s tail. ——)”Hey this does look good on me. Hmm just as silky as mine, not that it wouldn't’ be I guess. Oh and wow I do have a nice body. I mean I guess I knew that, but it’s really something seeing it like this.”
IF you decide to retcon the impregnation scene at the end of the first one, just remember to actually remove it from the fic.
How can that happen seconds after his transformation?
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I'm not sure what else to say but to read the story this is a sequel to? It's kinda spelled out in there...
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I got another suggestion
Cookie gets with Roseluck
Also I see Sweetie using a futa potion...
Lots of pregnancy choices to use
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I always feel bad because I'm likely disappointing people, but I have this habit of trying not to give people false hope...
So uh... yeah I don't like futa... like at all. So probably not gonna happen sadly.
Okay, I admit that I normallly don't like anthro stories, yet you somehow managed the almost impossible. Making me like an anthro story.
How the fuck did this happen????
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I rather say Cookie change herself into a Hondo duplicate and have her way with Honey. This way, Hondo become his own son-in-law. But wouldn't that count as incest?
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Not disappointed
If you wanna go fully bizarre, why not have rarity become Hondo for the day or something . So she/he can get together for some incest while also giving honey a daddy for the day
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Eh female to male transformations just aren't my thing. Also I just can't see Rarity wanting to look like her dad either.
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Why Roseluck? That seems like a really random choice.
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I was more thinking accidentally and then she just kinda roles with it. But if that's not really your thing then that's fine. Your fic after all.
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Ah accidently makes sense, but yeah I'll be looking for a solution that avoids any FTM transformations. Partly because I like the idea of twin Rarity's to match my twin Sweetie's.
Of course Cookie could always end up looking like anyone or thing really. I just need something that seems fun. ^_^
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Random is the reason, it would be something unique
Oh man am I excited seeing this! And then reading the description and it's implications makes me drool with anticipation, I fizzing love TF stories where the transformed (either through mental change or genuine acceptance) considers staying/does stay in their new form!! You have definitely got my hopes up for this sequel even more than the previous story did, videomaster!! Now, time to read this first chapter...
Loving this so far, and can't wait to see what happens next
You featured again.
I find myself agreeing with that.
I don't like the idea of Hondo and Cookie splitting up how about them got ng back and forth of one of them being a girl and the other a male like Cookie turning into Spike Then back into younger versions of themselves
Hey, how topical!
I think you should have Cookie become a Rarity clone, maybe an older version, and have Spike become Honey’s new father.
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That would be cool actually
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Fixed. It's always the small things you miss. >_<