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WinterStormed


#BRONY FOREVER ( Brov... Where's the trailer ? Netflix I tell you...)

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This story is a sequel to Book 2: Bluebloods Ascension


Miraak the first dragonborn has been slain.

By spear and lance with blood flowing from his veins.

Laid low, laid low...

...the weak,...the innocent...the brave.

But with tidings most strange and devious...

This was not his life's end. No...

Under Celestia light...he awoke...as a pony.

What fickle's things may a dragon be...with such a gift?

But there is a prophecy.... a prophecy that ties him with the fate of Equestria.

Will he succeed?

Or will he become corrupt just like in the previous life ?

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Hi fellow ponies!
Big thanks to user BleuBlooms who gave me a beautiful long description for my story.check out his stories at https://www.fimfiction.net/user/368156/BleuBlooms.

This is my first crossover fic!
Comments appreciated and if you enjoy it.. Like it!

Featured: 15/03/2021 ?....your'll guys are the best!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Hi!

So...this is...probably insulting. But I can be stubborn?

Cough bullheaded cough.

I just couldnt leave a fellow dragon lover down.

So this is my edit of your summary by...just adding that sense of pazy. (How do you spell that word? Ugh!)

Pazza...? (Ouch...I felt that. In my brain. Lol)

So anywho...

Here it is. Just kindly tell me to shove off. If I come across as rude. I dont know until I know...you know?

Oh snap? Yes I did that. I was only ashamed a little. Lol.

New Summary:

Miraak the first dragonborn has been slain.

By spear and lance with blood flowing from his veins.

Laid low, laid low...

...the weak,...the innocent...the brave.

But with tidings most strange and devious...

This was not his lifes end. No...

Under Celestia light...he awoke...as a pony.

What fickles things may a dragon be...with such a gift?

So there it is. Comments? Concerns?...just if you do use it, just write a note. Say I dont know. Bro BleuBlooms was chill and helped out. ; )

Link to my what ever...channel? Page?

So chill...they like...helped...before I went famous. Lols

:rainbowlaugh:

So what do you think?

I just trimmed the fat mind. Cut out the bits that in the description took away from the fullness of your storys potential.

(Even, though, are good tools but placed before in a haphhazard way-any other such words...the definition escapes me. I apologize...?

You just need to imagine your around a campfire and you have a story to tell!)

Enrapturing your audience with your skill and imagination! :)

Have a good day! :twilightsmile:

10721845
Dude that was..... Beautiful.
Yep I'm definitely using it.
Thanks for the help!

10721870
Your welcome! Just give a little credit and cool dude!

This has a lot of potential. Definitely keeping an eye on this story/

Dude! This is the first story I have seen that's going to be based with the gen 5! Props to you for making a story that seems very interesting in the next gen. I do have a question though. Is this story going to be on a type of hiatus until the gen 5 series actually comes out? It seems that way because of what your author's note said.

10739409
HI!
Thanks for commenting
To answer your question I already got chapter 2 ready but I want to finish bluebloods ascension first coz it will give more of a background for this story. Also
Thanks for reading I hope you truly enjoyed it

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