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Uncle Iroh


Welcome to my profile, please, have a seat and enjoy some calming Jasmine tea.

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Hello everyone, the name is... I forgot my name... What am I called? William Thompson! Yeah that's my name, anyway I was walking down the props area and I saw a pretty little thing that caught my eye, it was Kizaru's Justice Jacket, so I bought it from a Merchant and I got sent to Equestria as Kizaru. Being afraid of getting caught and tortured I trained myself for two years, now I see that my house got destroyed from a battle. I defeat a bad guy and I become a hero, but people are scared of me so I'll have to gain their trust.

I got my friends that were sent to different Equestria's, I got Haki, and I got speed.

Equestria here I come.


I know what you're saying a Displaced story? HOW ORIGINAL!!! But just bear with me, it's going to be fun, if you leave a dislike, explain why for me, it will help me improve my story :D

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 8 )

Downvoted because of an overabundance of Tell, Don't Show, a grammatical massacre, first-person Gary Stu, and a bizarre form of stream-of-consciousness writing that is actively repellent.

I don't know if this was meant as a crackfic to bait exactly this kind of response - if so, well done. Otherwise, this is awful.

honestly I like it it's funny af, I cant wait for the next chapter.

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Thank you for your information sir/ma'am. I'll be sure to rewrite it.

Comment posted by Starkiler deleted May 4th

Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor

Two questions.
How did Kizaru end up in Equustria?
And where are the other two admirals?

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Twe answers.
The Merchant sent him to Equestria like usual.
They're in different Equestria's.

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