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NinjaMare


Welcome to main page readers! my name is Floral Essence (aka NinjaMare), and here you will find mostly HiE fics, among other kinds of fics. hopefully you all enjoy what I have to offer.

Comments ( 8 )

-this fic features the Rule36 version of Shining Armor, Gleaming Shield.

don't you meal rule 63

I'm not into gender bending but I have some exceptions as long as they are the proclaimed gender from the get-go.
Plus Gleaming Shield and Queen Umbra are my favs.

”Anonymous does not forgive.”

Yikes, grammar errors in the description already. I'm scared, but I'll give this a shot. I'm always up for Gleaming Shield.

I-

I seriously cannot read this. There are tons of grammatical and spelling errors, like "patience" being spelled "patients." The idea is nice, but the grammar errors seriously knocks it down. 5.5/10

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V8 #5 · Jan 27th, 2021 · · ·

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This story would be better if it was proofread, no?

Good read, but has a consistent grammatical error i've noticed.

‘It looks like he’s already been assisting mare’s all afternoon.’

“Just goes to show you how much human’s love having sex.”

Soon all five mare’s,

Plural - remove the apostrophes.

‘It’s much more, earthier and potent than a stallions.

May be wrong, but I'm pretty sure this one needs an apostrophe.

Also misc errors that should be addressed.

not to loudly

“We want more to.

too

“Then I’m up then~”

Definitely should be changed, but not sure how.

Regardless, it was a good read.

this fic features the gender bent version of Shining Armor

this fic features the Rule63 version of Shining Armor, Gleaming Shield.

This fic features no editing of any kind. There are jumps betweeen tenses within a single sentence. You didn't even care to capitalize your sentences properly within the description. :twilightangry2:

I unfortunately need a long rest

Anon speaks in D&D terms. Also, wrong word order.

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