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Marezinger Z


Always looking to learn and enhance my craft as well as share in the fandom fun.

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All As One, a budding but enigmatic group begins to make its presence known across Equestria. Bearing a message of unity that claims to surpass Princess Celestia's ideals of friendship, they soon catch the eye of Twilight Sparkle who is quick to investigate. While this mysterious group and its reclusive leader claim to desire peace for the world, the methods and ideals behind that goal may not be all that they appear. Friendship and unity; how are they different, how are they the same... and can they coexist.

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Destroying a problem does not mean you’ve solved it, only that you lack the patience, resolve and character to try. :trollestia:

Boom! :rainbowdetermined2: Truer words were never spoken!
Unfortunately, the world's history is full of those who sought to take a shortcut to get an easier way to fairness and equality, only to bring injustice and misery to everyone while keeping a select handful just a little "more equal than others", as the Pig called it in Animal Farm.

that's a very nice image you have there !

p.s. Can we talk in P.M. ?

The idea is interesting, but the execution is kinda...lacking. The ending doesn't really wrap up the story, some of the dialogue is pretty forced, and it just didn't hold my interest. I'm not gonna downvote, but I'm not gonna upvote, either.

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Personally, I think it's a great setup for a sequel and maybe even a series.
It also feels like it would fit surprisingly well as a Doctor Who episode, with only minor changes needed to suit the different shows.

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