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Set during Season 6 Episode, 'Flutter Brutter'.

Having Zephyr Breeze failing 2 previous job attempts from her friends, Fluttershy turns to Discord for help. Fluttershy hopes that this time that Zephyr doesn't screw this one up. And that Discord doesn't give him a hard time.

Written for #FluttercordWeek

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Great story for the Fluttercord week!

I have not gotten that far in the show, but I do like how you showed Zephyr and Fluttershy wanting to help her brother. As well as Discord being understanding to Fluttershy, showing how much he has grown over his time at Equestria.

This was a cute story. Good job. :twilightsmile:

Wonderful story! :heart: Fluttershy and Discord's interactions were all very sweet. I liked their discussion about her helping Zephyr, with both of them giving their honest thoughts and understanding each other's view...and that mention that Fluttershy is the closest thing Discord has to a family? :rainbowkiss:

And oh, the interactions between Zephyr and Discord...quite fun to read! Especially since Discord loves the mess Zephyr made...and Zephyr finds it more terrifying to keep working for him than being "fired" and risking his sister's wrath. :rainbowlaugh:

There were a lot of other little details I loved—from the foghorn-whistle than Fluttershy uses to call Discord, to how Discord perks up at getting more O&O things and being treated to ice cream by her.

"There might be a slump chance for him….”

I think you meant "slight". There might be a few other misplaced words, but this is the only one that really jumped out to me.

"my pet plant Octavius--”

Is that a reference to "The Element of Kindness" I see?

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Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write.

And you were right about Octavius. I thought it would be funny to put in a Easter egg.

I know this is a Fluttercord story, but I think we needed to see more of the story from Zephyr's perspective. I actually want to see how exactly he ended up where he did.

This was a great story to read! Plus, it was funny at the flying badgers part I read, lol. Good job on this!

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