I write fetish clopfics and other things. Commissions: Not Open, working on existing commissions.
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Thank you! Very good, excited for this series, hope there's alot more to come! Hope there's more fetishes too. Would love to see more watersports, rimming and maybe more.
I know how hard it is to write a story in the present tense, so I certainly respect this. If this is what you want to write, then don't get discouraged by the dislikes. I can't speak from a position of authority, but at least I know that I've written stories since I was seven, and I'm 23 now. I don't think it's poorly written.
Just to do some backseat driving, I noticed two rather obvious errors at the end of the chapter. One was spelling "mandatory" as "manditory," and the other was using the incorrect form of "was" in the conditional clause. Of course, "were" should only be used if you're speaking about a hypothetical, like in the Swedish pop song "if I were sorry," not when you're talking about something that is currently happening, or will happen in the future. Ciao.
A well structured, finely written story.
The dislikes are for the tags, not for the quality.
Keep up the good work, it's refreshing to find a decent ongoing story in this day and age.
Any chances of public rape with bestiality?
Oooh I can't wait for the scat!!! I know it's coming you keep teasing at it.. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter... Great so far, though I'm not a fan of actual injury and mutilation, it's not permanent I hope..
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It's not permenant, hence sending for a medic to treat her.
Yesssssssss.....
Should probably be a time skip here.
Forgot punctuation.
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I feel like zebra females are inherently broodmares.
"Ah, piss."
- Sniper, and also the guards
Can't wait for more of this!!!
Absolutely loving this story, hope it keeps going... Are there going to be any hardcore scat scenes?
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I have plenty more idea to work with. As for your question, I'm not sure yet. Usually I'm the turn it up to 11 right out of the gate, but this time I'm going slow and working on the story.
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Oh yes please do... Even if you make it in a seperate outside chapter or something, this is my favorite of your stories and it's the hottest and I hope it reaches its fullest potential because of its nonconsensual goodness ;^)