Deasly's Night with Spitfire

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Phi

Phi #1 · Sep 2nd, 2012 · · ·

dafuq did I just read oO
*like*

last two sentences confuse me?
shouldn't it be spitfire instead of dawnchaser

TacoTown

TacoTown #2 · Sep 2nd, 2012 · · ·

...that's... that's just wrong.

Star Sage

Star Sage #3 · Sep 2nd, 2012 · · ·

1205149

Heh, thanks. This was a trade with Deasly again, and was a lot of fun to write. Mind, it's ponies, they can't help but be fun. Also, Spitfire is still unaware of Deasly at the end, DawnChaser, she, and Soarin were having fun together.

Phi

Phi #4 · Sep 2nd, 2012 · · ·

k, wasn't clear
thought it was just spitfire an soarin

but seriously, why did you write that?

Star Sage

Star Sage #5 · Sep 2nd, 2012 · · ·

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The story, or that bit at the end? The story because it was what Deasly wanted. No big reason there, and he wrote me a good one in return. The bit at the end because it was getting on 4 am my time when I finished(Took about 2 hours to write this), and it amused me.

Olpoe

Olpoe #6 · Sep 3rd, 2012 · · ·

Dude I laughed so hard

Star Sage

Star Sage #7 · Sep 3rd, 2012 · · ·

1208153

Thanks, I tried.

Tadpole

Tadpole #8 · Sep 3rd, 2012 · · ·

I'm still not 18+, I guess I have to let this go for now. :(

Star Sage

Star Sage #9 · Sep 3rd, 2012 · · ·

1211883

Sorry, story contains sex, so I had to mark it as mature, same with the other one. The one I wrote last night, that one doesn't have that, though it has some...odd situations to it.

Desert Storm