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The Sleepless Beholder


I just headbutt the keyboard till my ideas spill out into writing. Sometimes it works.

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This story is a sequel to Seeking My Purpose In The World


Sunset has spent the last few months discovering a lot about herself, learning to call those close to her as friends, but her travel has just started, and the challenges she’ll face will only grow as she moves forward.

Will friendship prevail? Or will it be the very thing that dooms her?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 31 )

Woohoo! So happy this is up!! :twilightsmile:

I swear, this better not be an April Fools' joke... >,>

“That’s the true enemy,” Luna said, taking the attention from everypony. “We can all hope that Sunset is innocent, and everything has been Sunshine’s doing, but the matter is that beings like her are essentially parasites that live off their host’s magic and channel a strong desire in them, taking control and forcing them to do their will.”

I just sang My War while reading this in my head and then this line came up and my brain obviously jumps to : you are the real enemy.... Wow ...

Why is Sunsets HP so low when she's 4 times Trixies level? ^^

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Her constitution is lower than Trixie's :rainbowlaugh: It's only 15 hitpoints of diference

Nightmare shrugged. “This is entertaining.”

Good to see that even a creature like Nightmare enjoys a good show.

“I don’t have how,” Nightmare answered.

I think the words have the know are missing, otherwise remove have.

And you also misspelled Fluttershy three times at the end.

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Good to see that even a creature like Nightmare enjoys a good show.

It gets boring inside Sunset :rainbowlaugh:

I think the words have the know are missing, otherwise remove have.

I don't know what you're referring to, I translated a sentence from spanish so there may be something lost in translation

And you also misspelled Fluttershy three times at the end.

Thank you, I think I got all

“I don’t know. Rainbow-making is usually left to the pegasus at either the Weather Factory or one of its subsidiaries, generally some construction company.”

They better not be murdering pegasi to make rainbows.:flutterrage:

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Funny enough, when I wrote the chapter I started calling it the Rainbow Factory before I realized it wasn't it's actual name :rainbowlaugh:

Mispelled Fluttershy's name again,

The A/N had me laughing.

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Thank you, don't know how it escaped editing.

The A/N had me laughing.

:rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Edguy0009 deleted Apr 2nd, 2021

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I don't know what you're referring to, I translated a sentence from spanish so there may be something lost in translation

“I don’t have the know how,” Nightmare answered.

“I don’t how,” Nightmare answered.

These are what I meant.

Well, that was an exciting first five chapters, and an interesting end to chapter 3! I can't wait to see more!

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I'm glad I didn't miss my touch. There will be a lot more surprises down the line!

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Ooh, looking forward to seeing them!

Blueblood chuckled. “The CAA will make sure you don’t get a crossbow bolt in the throat during your speech.”

Canterlot Aristocratic Armor? :pinkiecrazy:

They Are going to meet daring do

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She Spect as A Solar Mage
Trixi is an illusionist,
The illusionist is slightly more physical (see seemingly suicidal stunts)

... daring do and the Legasy of Sacanas (as in the storm king’s staff)
... sunset on starlight

... sun meets balance (the Kirin)

... The bell of Grogar

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Easy, they are looking into legends, who is known for doing that? Daring!

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Easy, they are looking into legends, who is known for doing that? Daring!

Ooh, if Trixie and "Flanksy" go to the show as well as Rainbow and "Fluttershy" they might meet! (Can changelings cloud walk? Sunset's thestral transformation couldn't)

“He seems to be comfortable, and I gave him a very simple task,” Trixie assured her with a wave of her hoof. “Although, Trixie can predict that we would be cramped in her wagon if we’re three-” A caw interrupted her. “Sorry, four, sleeping together.”

Well, we know from Flutter Brutter, no matter how simple the task, Zephyr avoids doing the work, and sure one outsources it. But at least Sunny, I mean, Flanksy is willing to give home a second chance.
Wonder when it's going come to light that he's Fluttershy's little brother?

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