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3413065 Thanks for the input
Its been tricky getting to this stage for various reasons. You are not the first to point out the Scuba inaccuracies and you are right, but as far as FoE goes they have enough trouble as it is without including the bends and I am sure stable-tec would have worked out how to solve it.
The stats for the guns and the ships were as such to make them not look over powered. Many FoE fics have massively powerful guns that the protagonist can use to get them out of that dire spot and I would rather avoid those moments as there are far better ways and more interesting ways to get your protagonist out of trouble.
I am very glad though that you like the opening section. The first 3 chapters were totally rewritten back in November of 2012 and it seems like it has paied off.
And don't worry about Seafire... yet.
3452002
Holy shit this story is awesome!
3455552 Thank you so much! You just made my day.
Any particular reasons why?
3455730 I've made it to chapter 4 as of this moment and I can't really explain why, it's just good! Your language is simple but at the same time near-perfectly detailed, pacing is excellent and for once it's not another run-of-the-mill-hero-pony-on-her-own its about an entire STABLE!
I dunno, I just like it, keep it up!
3456208 Thanks I don't know of another story that is dealing with an entire stable in the same way. I am glad you find it easy to read, I find the spelling and detailing one of the hardest parts.
Let me know what you think when you get to the end .
Been a famtastic read so far!
3476232 Thanks As usual for all my readers, what bits did you like the most?
3477994 I like the charaters , setting, the everything! I love that their stable was underwater, Fran's kink and how she deals with it. It all make for a great whole. Can't wait for the next chapter!
3534264 Thank you so much! Anything in particular that makes is so good?
Well I hope they find the other soon, good chapter again
Hello there!, I'm not sure if you'll see this comment to ill just type it in your latest chapter as well.
I'm writing my own Fallout Equestrian story and the stable my protagonist came from
just so happened to be from Stable 25.
I'm asking for permission that I can use Stable 25 (since you beat me to it)
I'd use another stable but they've all been taken and the story is all set to this specific stable!
It would be a very unpleasant experience to write it all out again and change EVERYTHING. Soooo
Can I use stable 25 that's years before you came to it?
oh, this makes me think of a crazy fan-comic where a pony SUCKS on a unicorn's horn...and makes her have a...um...ok, there's no other way to put it...horngasm.
(it's called "the usual" by pyruvate. definitely NSFW)