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Rainbow sparkle1


Huge fan of dark/horror stuff. Is autistic. Fan of FNAF, Henry Stickmin, Among Us, FNF, TF2, and Sonic the Hedgehog. A singer, artist, actress, gamer, and Gacha creator. Rainbow Dash is best pony

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Rainbow Dash was hanging out with the girls when she suddenly blacked out. She woke up to find that she was in the middle of nowhere with a building nearby. She ran over to it to find a stick figure standing next to it, holding a bag. She walked up to them, asked what they were doing, and teamed up. Little did Dash know this action would lead to a long adventure that could change her life forever.


Based on the game series "The Henry Stickmin Collection," make sure to check it out first if you don't want any spoilers on what happens in the game.

I'm making this a choose your adventure fic just like the game it's based on with links in each chapter to other chapters when an ending splits off of one another, like when the endings split from the intros of the first few games in the series, so I hope you enjoy what is up so far! :twilightsmile:

Thanks so much to Asiandra for editing some of the parts that are up and making the cover art.


warning: will have some scary and sad elements in some endings.

Chapters (33)
Comments ( 57 )

The word I should always be capitalized. Please respond to this comment.

Rainbow Dash ends up in prison? Interesting.

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i know, but i have grammarly so it does fix it, I think it just missed some places or maybe I didn't check it yet, I'll fix it

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well, since she and henry stickmin had teamed up and robbed the bank together, it would make sence

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Well regardless, I'll be liking and following this story.

I don't mean to be rude, but this is only the second chapter and I already see a lot of errors in both chapters. If you don't mind, can I copy and paste both chapters into a google document and edit it, then send it to you?
It's okay if you don't want me to, it's just a suggestion to help you out.

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i mean, i do have grammarly so it fixed all the spelling errors, but i dont have premium, so i'm perfectly fine with it, I’ll even let you edit every upcoming chapter, so I’ll send you a doc of finished chapters waiting to be published

Check your punctuation, there are some names that aren't capitalized.

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Just put the edited version from my friend in, you may want to reread it now that it’s fixed, I’m doing the same with the next chapter as well

Ok this is, interesting?

I'm surprised Henry is so chill with a magical rainbow pegasus just popping up. Rainbow's rambling dialogue when she introduced herself didn't seem natural to me, more like it was an exposition dump as opposed to something she'd actually say...

But that could just be me, either way I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

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that's great! i am planning to have the next part up hopefully by next month, so you don't have to wait very long!

I've read through a good chunk of this and I'm sorry to say this, but it's a bit boring. Nothing new happens, Rainbow's presence does nothing to the story, you could remove her completely and everything would be the same- just a short rundown of what happens in the game. There's no substantial change when there should be.

There's nothing here to keep my interest, it's just Escaping The Prison but Rainbow is there.

so this why i like this ending

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yeah i alway i like this ending

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I’m so sorry to hear that, but it was my idea to write it like this, but the way I see it is that dash kinda spruces henry’s Adventure up a little with her being there, i’m even planning on adding extra scenes whenever dash isn’t with Henry. So when I get that out, hopefully it’ll bring your interest back

I really hope the Stealing the Diamond comes out soon.

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glad you like it. i think my editor finished one part a while ago so I should be getting back into the swing of things soon. hopefully to the point of being almost ready or ready to publish STD

Is Stealing the Diamond almost ready? I can't wait anymore.:applecry:

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I still have one more ending to do and it usually takes a while with me writing it and waiting for Rasazy to finish editing, so you’ll just have to wait a little longer, plus I’m going to be starting my first year of high school in 2 weeks so it might take a tad longer. don’t worry though, I’ll get to writing that last ending as soon as I possibly can. Also, do you have this in a tracking library? If not, I’ll be posting a blog post when it’s out, and you’ll see it in your feed when I post it.

Sorry for the wait:twilightsheepish:

update: read this, I think you'll like it :pinkiehappy: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/958875/stealing-the-diamond-on-rd-and-a-stickmin-is-almost-ready-to-be-published

Yolo bust in all the way like a boss.:rainbowdetermined2:

You can’t fool us Henry we all know that you remember all of the timelines:pinkiehappy:

Question instead of using the teleported you could have RD fly him up. Or at least have a reason why she can’t

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no cap, my editor added that line, and I laughed so hard when I first read it and DM'ed her on discord about it, and she found it funny herself

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I did think about that, but I changed my mind and made henry just use the teleporter instead as he does in the actual game, plus dash didn't want to get caught by any guards that were possibly on the roof, because that was the deal she made with henry

Such amazing Chapters, can't wait for Infiltrating the Airship.

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i'm so glad you enjoy this. i'm sure you'll love what's to come

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you know, while you wait for Infiltrating the airship to come out, why don't you read my other stories. Cupcakes After the Fact, Forever Playful, and the first few chapters in Rainbow Dash's Awesome Daring Adventure are very short and cringe, and the last chapters in Rainbow Dash's Awesome Daring Adventure, and Five Nights At Pinkie's the musical are a little better but I didn't have an editor at the time. but if you could give those stories a read, I would really appreciate it.

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i need everyone to see this blog post. i need to know what you guys want me to do with this story.

and yes, I had to reply as it gives you guys notifications.

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Big important announcement in my latest blog post. I need everyone to see it please!

I put your story in the Dead and Cancelled Group so if somebody wants to finish the rest of the chapters would you be OK with that?

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as long as they credit my work, then I'm perfectly fine with it being continued by another person. if it does happen, I'll be more than willing to check it out. :twilightsmile:

HENRY STICKMIN × MLP FANFIC?!?!
Well color me pleased as punch!

We’ll definitely not rpe and tb and absolutely not gspi and pd I hated that ending rip Charles.

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good thing i'm adding more endings then, because VH is the only one available at this time

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I have news for ya! There's a new ending out for you to read. enjoy! :twilightsmile:

This was originally a comment pointing out errors, now it is I Dio! a Changeling disguised as a comment! frozen in there, and we're out here, and that it's the sheriff, and that we're frozen out here, and that we're in there, and I just remembered we're out here.
What I want to know is, where's the cavepony? a perfectly normal comment.

He thought about using the spring but remembered they can be pretty loud when used, so it would definitely alert the guard.

DAMNIT SONIC!!!!!

(Since I knew the spring option was a sonic reference, I had to :rainbowlaugh:)

Edits Part 2

Government: Parachute, Tank Toppats: Dummies, Missile

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Ok, how did my grammarly not pick that up? Thanks for pointing that out.

Government: Parachute, Tank Toppats: Dummies, Missile

Government: Parachute, Tank Toppats: Dummies, Missile

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