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Tyranno's first visit to Appleloosa isn't exactly ideal, the half eaten bodies of ponies and buffalo begin showing up and nopony knows what is doing it. Along with Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Braeburn he sets out to find whatever creature is doing the killing and stop it at all costs. Nothing can prepare him for what he is about to find.
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It's good. I like where it's headed but if you could somehow separate the train scenario from the demon scenario with, perhaps, a border (to show that it's all happening at a different place), that would be nice.
1210826 Glad to here you're liking the story so far, thanks for favouring it as well and for reminding me to put in the border, also I should mention that the idea for this came from reading the Jurassic Park : Devils in the Desert comic series though I don't consider this to be a crossover ,so if you have read those comics then you might already know what is doing the attacking, i'm not gonna reveal them just yet.
Interesting story. One question though. Do I have to read Beast of Equestria to understand this? I feel a tad lost.
1219849 No you don't the two stories are unrelated
1219902 Thank you
1219912 No problem, thank you for favouriting my story