Even the most well-intending pony can go too far to save another, but what happens when there's nothing left to save?
Thank you to Zontan, Mushroom, and The Legendary Bill Cipher for pre-reading and editing assistance.
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Silent Whisper
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I'll admit I was only so-so around the halfway mark, but then you brought it all together so darn perfectly.
I wish I could spin a longer-winded web regarding how much I enjoyed this story, but the proper words seem to be eluding me at the moment. So, for the sake of keeping things simple, have a Thumbs Up and a Favorite—you and your story earned 'em and then some.
:)
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Thank you very much! This comment made my day, and I mean that sincerely.
Will there be a sequel?
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I'm not sure what a sequel would be about, necessarily, but if I think of something I might write it.
10629849
Care to elaborate?
EDIT: for posterity's sake, this comment was a response to a since-deleted negative critique of the story that was only one word long.
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This person's just like this, and known for this sort of comment.
10629849
Why are you like this? What'd I do to offend you so?
This has made me think about life. Only the best stories do that. Honestly, I can see why it's sat in the Featured box at the moment. You've earned yourself another follower with this one.
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You exist. That's all the excuse that account needs to troll in the comments. Like they're some sort of expert on what is a good story or not.
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At least include an insult or something. The only thing to be offended by is your laziness, and that's not even worth my time, much less the author's.
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I can't even consider this trolling, there's not enough substance to it.
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Maybe about how The Spider became a Spider, and whoever The Spider was before her.