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AleximusPrime


Brony since 2011. More of an artist, but slowly making my way into becoming a better author too! Known for Age of the Alicorns and Flurry Heart's Story.

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This story is a sequel to Flurry Heart's Story: Calming of the Storm


Tirek is brought before Twilight and sentenced to a mandatory reformation class with Fluttershy and Discord while Flurry and Spike tag along for the day to see if it works. Tirek seems to eventually come around until they discover the truth about his motives. Can they actually change the centaur criminal's heart or will his unfettered hatred keep him from listening?

Inspired by the official show, this is part of a fan-made sequel series I created called "Flurry Heart's Story", which documents the adventures of Flurry Heart as she makes friends and faces new and familiar villains, some of which may still be redeemable.

Next story: Apple Family Memories

Flurry Heart's Story and its author are in no way associated with Hasbro or any of the creative team behind My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. This series is entirely fan-made and is created in honor of the official show. No copyright infringement is intended or encouraged. Please support the official release.

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Comments ( 122 )

Nice, I like a Tirek reformation story! do i have to read the stories before this?

“What?! Princess, I just told you I’m sorry. Is that not enough for you?”

After all those crimes that you committed specially draining the magic from the other ponies and creatures and not only that you tried to kill Twilight and the others so no it's not enough Tirek

Well that was pretty unexpected so flurry heart and spike went back to Canterlot to meet up with Twilight about her experience in Ponyville but it looks like things have escalated pretty quickly fizzlepop Berrytwist and the rest of her guards captured lord tirek and it looks like time caught up to him even in stone prison and it looks like Chrysalis and cozy glow got away but apparently Tirek is not resisting he's actually apologizing for his crime even though it's not enough so Twilight decided to get them Redemption for him or whatever you want to call it and decided to give it to Fluttershy and Discord to help him become good well this should be very interesting how this will work out can't wait

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I can tell you're into reforming the Trio based on your icon! :3

Well there's probably a bit of context in this story that you won't get unless you read the first three. I would recommend reading them first, but you can read this one alone and it probably won't be as confusing, though I'm not sure when I'll have the next chapter up. it can take a week or two to get one written and sometimes longer, though I am a lot better about updating fanfics than I used to be.

Still a bit surprised that Tirek is the first of the trio to make an official reappearance, and it is to be reformed. Tirek was one of my personal favorite villains, since his powers and fights reminded me of an anime villain.

I guess I’ll have to see how this reformation turns out. If Fluttershy and Discord can’t get the job done maybe they should consider getting help from Tirek’s family, like Scorpan or Tirek’s Gram-Gram.

Welp, here we go! The first of The Trio gets to the redemption path, both Flutters & Discord sure have their work cut out for them! :twilightoops:

PS : Love both Spike & Discord face expressions on the cover pic! :rainbowlaugh:

Ooh boy, this is gonna be good. So Tirek's found a way free from his stone imprisonment, and is trying to get in Twilight's good books? He always did have a smooth way with words, as he showed when he swayed Discord to his side, but I had a feeling Her Studiousness wouldn't take it so easily. I've got a feeling Fluttershy and Discord will have their work cut out for them, but if anyone can get a start on rehabilitating Tirek, it's them.

Nice addition, too, having Scorpan as the new king of their old kingdom. I know he'd probably want to repair things with his brother, but perhaps even he knows it might be a losing battle at the present.

Ooh, can't wait to see where this goes!

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I also like Tirek t shirts 😆

By the way that is another good way to show Fluttershy and discard being part of it sense Fluttershy has no kids

Once again, this is a really good start to this story. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all wonderfully done. I particularly adored Spike's reflections on how Flurry and her new friends are reminding him of Twilight and her friends when they were starting out as well as the reason they were able to catch Tirek so easily. And, I DID enjoy Tirek's reason why he was on his own when he was spotted. Plus, I certainly appreciate Twilight giving Tirek a chance to prove he is sincere in that remorse while still taking reasonable precautions. And, yeah, it is definitely understandable about why this is NOT as easy as Tirek seemed to think it would be.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

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Well she may have kids someday, but she hasn't found that special stallion in her life just yet...

This should be fun, although I'm not sure how wise it is getting Discord to try and reform him. I do feel quite bad for Tirek with this backstory.

Just read all the previous stories and loved them. This is starting off great! Looking forward to reading more.

Ooh, can I guess who it is? My bet's on Tempest Shadow, Luna, and, uh...Gilda

Also, seems like Discord might be a little jealous. Plus, Angelica seems much nicer than her daddy (but who's the mom?)

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Eh, close but not them.

I haven't drawn any pics of Angel's mate yet, but I'll get to it at some point.

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Dangit and ooh! Can't wait to see Angel's mate!

Well, this is off to an interesting start, and Discord's already getting some form of comeuppance against Tirek, lol.

I wonder who these reformed antagonists are going to be. I know we've had several, but who do we know who could be compared to our old centaur pal?

Nice to see the next story!

Fluttershy zoomed around locking doors to storage sheds and checked each animal’s domain to make sure they were safe. Meanwhile, Discord could be seen wearing a camouflaged army uniform as duplicates of himself parachuted down from the sky. Instead of carrying actual weapons, they had long objects like brooms, candy canes, and fishing poles in their arms. Discord blew a whistle and they all stood straight in formation.

All units a magical soul sucking creature heading towards Fluttershy's Cottage Code Red

aaaand cliffhanger as soon as it gets interesting
of course

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Lol, I didn't think of that! XD

So in this series Fluttershy and Discord are just friends right?

“That’s right, Spike. He wouldn’t hurt a fly. I’ve got my eyes on him.” Discord said as his eyeballs popped out of their sockets and floated around Tirek.

He means I quite literally lol 😆 that is so gross but clever

“This here’s Angelica Bunny. I used to have a pet rabbit named Angel. He’s not with us anymore, but he left behind an adorable little daughter. Say hi, Angelica.”

What do you mean he's not here anymore is he dead or just left 😥

“Oh that’s right! I almost forgot I invited a few Villains Anonymous buddies over to help out with reforming Tirek!” Discord said as a light bulb appeared over his head.

Ohhh he's going to invite a couple of formal Baddies is it going to be like the other old villains from the previous My Little Ponies show or movies or could it be like suri polomare wind rider Lightning Dust flim and flam?

Ok they look like they're getting a very interesting start with this Redemption anyway Fluttershy and Discord we're having a get-together then suddenly he senses tirek was coming which is true but along with Twilight flurry heart and Spike so Twilight ask Fluttershy and discard to reformed tirek so they agreed to but things kind of went a little rocky he even talks about how he left Queen Chrysalis and cozy glow behind and they don't know what their whereabouts are but it looks like Fluttershy it's going for Plan B so Discord it's going to invite a couple of form of bad guys which could it be the previous bad guys from the old My Little Ponies I guess we'll find out next time

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He's dead. Rabbits don't live that long and I didn't feel like making him really old in this and then having to write in his death later.

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Would you mind keeping these spoiler-tagged from now on?

Tirek may need someone a little more calm to have an effect on him. I'm afraid the likes of Discord will only annoy him and Fluttershy won't be of much help.

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Ohhh ok that's sad but I guess that's true because bunny don't really live that long

Still feels a bit odd that Tirek is actually trying to commit to being reformed. Discord’s antics aren’t making it easy for him, but on the other hand Discord probably feels obligated to a little teasing after everything Tirek did to him.

I am curious to see who Fluttershy is going to bring in to talk with Tirek?

Grrrr! I apologized to Princess Twilight, and all I got was this stupid shirt?!

That actually sounds like something else that would be good on a shirt besides the “Be patient I’m reforming” one.

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Oh ok I sort of forgot about that I'll try to remember doing that.

You make the art right? If so have you ever thought of making these Flurry Heart stories into comics on Deviantart?

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I do the art, though the backgrounds aren't always mine. The links under the pictures don't lead to the DA upload, just the image itself on there, but on my DA, when I make such pictures, I credit the artist in the description if you are ever curious where it came from.

I have considered it, but it would be a bit too much work compared to writing, especially since these are tons of episodes I have planned. I might make some FHS-related comics someday, but I'm not sure.

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Ok, I think if you do it someday it would be pretty cool. Can’t wait for more episodes, I guess you will have like a 24 story season like the show?

Once more, a great job on this latest chapter. Greatly enjoyed the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Yeah, definitely understood the reactions to having Tirek that close to Fluttershy and Discord, but also enjoyed the point out that Tirek is currently at a low enough power level where most of the heroes present could take him in a fair fight if it came to that (which, to Tirek's credit, he IS pragmatic enough to acknowledge). And, yeah, also enjoyed Discord getting in a bit of payback on Tirek (like "messing with gravity" and the "novelty shirts") and showing signs of jealousy. And, yeah, we'll see what other reformed villains are brought in to help out (and that IS a good nod to the fact that Equestria DOES literally have enough reformed villains to form their own support group).

At any rate, certainly looking forward to more of this.

And here we go, almost feel bad for Tirek going though this reformation with Flutters/Discord........almost! (love the shirt though:rainbowlaugh:)

Looking forward to see what they have in store for Tirek next chapter, also love Angelica (glad she didn't take after her father) & guess it makes sense that Angel's gone since rabbits don't have a long lifespan. I wasn't a fan of him to be honest but at least my dislike of him was mitigated somewhat in *She Talks To Angel* ep when he finally had to deal with the consequences of his actions without Flutters bailing him out like always.

Looking forward to the next chapter Alex, keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

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It does feel odd, but there's a little more to Tirek right now than he's letting off.

Yeah, I should make it into an actual shirt someday and sell it at cons. XD

Ooh! Great new chapter, this is looking interesting!

Too bad Pharynx couldn't make it though, and Gilda, that would've been interesting. Oh well

So good to see the reformed unicorn trio appear, and it was even nice to see Iron Will back, though I had a feeling it'd still be an uphill battle trying to get on Tirek's good side. Can't give up yet.

I did get a chuckle out of the behavior of the peanut gallery of Discord clones. He really loves pulling 'me's a crowd', lol

“Sorry for the wait, everyone.” he said. “Unfortunately Garble, Gilda, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, Stygian, Pharynx, Flim, Flam, Caballeron and Ahuizotl are all a bit busy, but I managed to secure three special guests. Just the perfect amount for Tirek!”

Awww well that's pretty unfortunate because they could be a good one to help him understand but I guess they're busy

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We may see them in future stories.

Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizationsand future chapter set-up in all the right places. Admittedly, I'm surprised that Luna wasn't at least mentioned among the reformed villains (as Nightmare Moon, she was LITERALLY the VERY FIRST villain Twilight and her friends reformed) nor Tempest Shadow, but I DID really appreciate the list before Sunset, Trixie and Starlight showed up. Also really liked the mention of what Sunset has been up to since graduating from Canterlot High, but all the stories were great. Glad to see Iron Will making an appearance in this too. Of course, it's going to be extremely rough to get through to Tirek (to say the least), but they still get points for trying.

Definitely looking forward to more of this (especially to see if and how they succeed in getting through to Tirek)>

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We all know Discord loves making random silly duplicates of himself in the show, so I knew I had to show him doing it here. XD

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I didn't want to overload it with too many characters (though I feel like I still kinda did), but I would really like to try using those characters for future stories.

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Ooh, interesting

I guess that makes sense, if we're seeing Chrysalis again her top targets would probably be Starlight and the Reformed Hive

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