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LunarRainbow07


(She/Her) I write cute Luna fanfics, cute shipfics, and some other stories. I take requests, but not clopfics or NSFW. I might do grimdarks that aren't too graphic. Just DM me and I'll see!

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Rainbow Dash had lost everything she held dearly. Her world crumbled around her, but fortunately a certain purple alicorn is there for her. And will be there for her forever.

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Comments ( 9 )

Great cute story ! Can you teach me how to make such great stories?:trollestia:

Great story!

Is there going to be sequels to this story?

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To be honest, I originally wrote this as just kinda a one-off story but I do wanna make sequels now.

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I'm not great at explaining, but perhaps I could try :trollestia:

Story was too short for the feelings involved, too unrealistic that everything just happened to fall into place for both of them at the perfect time, and there was no progression or growth for the relationship. This has potential, but it needs a lot of work. Story in its current form just isn't believable enough for me to get into it.

"I heard once that once an alicorn finds her soulmate, their soulmate shares their immortality forever. And Dashie, you're my soulmate," Twilight said with a smile.

I actually had a similiar idea. It just wasn't automatic. Cute story by the way.

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Wrote that concept as my first story.

Good job! This is a ship I haven't really thought of before, but I support whatever you think. I personally ship Flutterdash and Sunlight, but I've gotta say, this is a really cute, thought out story! I loved it! I wonder if there's gonna be more! :heart:

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Yay! Thank you! I'm really bad at writing stories and it would be great to get better at it!:pinkiehappy:

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