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Shaslan


I make both fanart and fanfic. I draw all my cover images myself, and I take art and writing commissions!

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Fluttershy wakes up to the sound of birdsong and the sight of a beautiful day. She's going to go to the spa with Rarity. But Angel Bunny is missing, and there are ponies with scars who were healthy yesterday. Fluttershy can't put her hoof on it, but something isn't quite right.

An extended entry for the Quills and Sofas 'Sensational Sci-fi contest'. First half was written in an hour, the other half in about 2 hours.

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Comments ( 15 )

That was a dark and terrible groundhog day. In particular I thought the ending was a great twist to keep everything "happy"

Very dark, but good story.

Why isn't there a horror tag?

Wow, what a fantastic piece. It's a shame you didn't get to the reveal within the confines of the contest, but I'm glad you finished it anyway, because the ending is well worth it. It's a gripping piece, and it keeps you hooked from start to finish. Great job.

Wow! A very good, albeit frightening story, which reminded me of "Westworld".

Very, very good- but extremely disquieting. What would drive Twilight to taking the other alicorn's power and doing something like that? Thought-provoking.

Brought here by SA Round 184. Their recommendation didn't disappoint.

A gripping, disturbing tale, but one presented in a way that makes me want to see and learn more about what brought us to this point. Well done!

:pinkiegasp: Wooooooooow....this was crazy dark and awesome!

I kinda understand Twilight in this. Besides, in the end, she did try to give them a happy life.

Short, to the point, and utterly terrifying. Congratulations, you have done a fantastic work.

The 'second' day after everything is 'fixed' was the icing on the cake.

This was a very uncomfortable and upsetting story to read, and it's great. Excellent work.

I don't seek out these kinds of stories, but when I read them, I love them. An existential crisis FiMfic is only really good when it's well-written enough to take seriously, like this one. It highlights the dark and unsettling the fanfic's change is from the happy-go-lucky fairytale nature in the official content.

Also, Bureau of Pinkie Pie Containment made me laugh. It was like seeing the Joker do something genuinely funny while he's still threatening lives.

wow. that was great. I'd love to read more, but as it is, it's just long enough.

That's a dark place I really don't want to go. Finished right when it should have. Nice story :)

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