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Donttouchmysqueenus


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What's wrong? :pinkiesick:

The prose could use less redundancies, it was kinda clunky to read.
I liked the pacing a lot and the story (for what it is, AKA sex torture) was actually pretty good. After finishing it I can say the dislikes are all there because of the subject matter, not the actual quality of the fic. If you're okay with what it's about it's not bad at all

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