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just a silly guy with a passion for small colorful equines

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When a deep state of depression hits him, Drew realizes that his only option is put an end to his own life, but what happens if a certain blue Alicorn doesn't want him to die?

Follow Drew in his journey into a completely new world, a world of hope, joy and pastel ponies!


A.N. yes, I know, this is another "human in Equestria" story...

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 117 )

Well I will see what happens next chapter....

Wow! I'm really liking this so far.

You my friend, have perked my interests. The chapter was no doubt named after a similarly titled book which is what struck my fancy. Then you threw in my favorite Frank Sinatra song... (I love Frank Sinatra :rainbowkiss:). You get my thumb, fave, and mustache for style. :moustache:

I'm not sure where this will go but hopefully somewhere good.

Cheers!
~Bridge

This has caught my attention as well, and I would like to see more of this soon, so far it is pretty well written

Holy Moly, so many faves for the first story I ever wrote! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

1214725 Thank you kindly for your words, I'm currently working on next chapter (hopefully will be out in 2-3 days and it will be a little longer).
The title is actually taken from another song (every chapter will be named after a song), I hope you'll like my music choice (yes, Drew will sing again)!

Damn i got addicted to this already.May your time here grant you many tidings of awsome stories!:rainbowkiss:

Interesting fic so far, keep it up.

lol when i read the bit where he killed himself my friend playing time spliters died and his game yelled out SUICIDE ..... is it wrong that i laughed at that?:trixieshiftright:

Oh man this sounds like it's gonna get really good really fast. That was a really cool song he sang for luna did you make it up yourself or what? I'm kinda curious as to why he didn't realize that it was himself hanging from the tree. That's really the only thing that bugged me and even then it's just simple curiosity noting more noting less. Can't wait to read more.

1222054 No, the song is the only part I didn't create. It's a song from Frank Sinatra.
As for the hanging part, don't worry, there'll be an explanation! :raritywink:

Next chapter is cooking! :yay:

Damn, I like your style... I clicked this thinking it would be another cliche "Brony can't handle life, faux-emo wangst, place depressed dude in Equestria. Cue laugh track" style fics, but while the premise is a bit cliche, the style more than makes up for it. Here, have a moustache :moustache:

Indecisive in my feelings... Too early to form any real judgement.

Let's see the next few chapters, and I'll praise and/or criticize accordingly then.

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Loving it. :heart: If only they could be a bit longer, I would truly fall for this story. Keep up the good work! :ajsmug:

:fluttercry: It's so beautiful! :fluttershbad: Keep them coming! :twilightsmile:

Hmmmm... interesting :moustache:

1236222 *bows at the audience* :twilightblush:

1236511 and 1236266 glad you like my writing! :twilightsmile:

As a little bonus, here's the reason I made the Princesses sing that lullaby

Isn't this just perfect?

I originally planned to make them sing "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" but, after playing Dead Space 2, that song gives me the creeps! :raritydespair:

if you could make more that would be nice...:yay:but only if you want to that is:fluttershysad:

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Fear not, my friend, this story will continue! :ajsmug:

SPOILER: next chapter will contain ponies! :trollestia:

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i would have never have guessed it to be ponies awesome can't wait:derpytongue2:

50% awesome :moustache:
30% cool :rainbowdetermined2:
20% cheese :coolphoto:
dont ask were the cheese comes from
also please don't have him quit eating meat i beg of you

"a purple unicorn was busy searching through a pile of old dusty books."
When isnt she lol!dash.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/134328591462.jpg

1264752 the song is Snow (hey oh) by Red Hot Chili Peppers.

I'll keep track on your story.Hope you make more chapters.:raritystarry:

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Red Hot Chili Peppers - Snow

1264969 Cheese is good! :pinkiehappy:

As for the meat, I think I'll keep vague about it...

"Howdy Pinkie Pie, watcha eatin'?" :ajsmug:

"A filly cheesesteak!" :pinkiesmile:

"A WHAT?" :twilightoops:

"Help me, I can't find Sweetie Belle anywhere!" :raritydespair:

:pinkiecrazy:

"Buck, not again!" :facehoof:

There were parts in the chapter I felt were rushed. Other than that, great job. :twilightsmile:

1290393 I'll gladly post more chapters! :pinkiehappy:

Here it is, chapter four is finally done. It took FOREVER to finish, and I'm not really satisfied with it, but a promise is a promise! :ajsmug:

Let me know what you think of it! :raritywink:

P.S. as ever, I take no credit for the songs used.

P.P.S. daisy sandwiches give me gas :twilightoops:

This has my approval. Good work.

Best.Fic.EVAAAAAAAAAAAAR!:pinkiecrazy:

Awesome chapter. Keep it up!

funny thing...this will probably sound stupid but a while back i actually bought some daisy's and random flowers even hay just to see what they tasted like..... and from what i remember daisy's weren't that bad ... just a very strong flavor. anyway my stomach did not agree with me the next day as i was kinda sick. like really sick..... but now i know!:twilightblush:

I have no idea what song that was. Then again, I'm not one for listening to music.

Nice job!
love how you work these songs into the story.

1414457 :rainbowlaugh:

1414924 actually it's two songs: Drew is singing Wishing Well, by Terence Trent D'Arby and Twi is singing Love at First Sight, by Kylie Minogue

1415313>>1415738>>1416999 Thanks, guys! So happy you like my work! :pinkiehappy:

1413857 I'm glad and scared at the same time... :twilightsheepish:

Well, I was personally hoping for this story to have some Luna shipping. But, I certainly am not going to complain. Good show.

Great, now i feel all warm and fuzzy inside :twilightsheepish:
Love how the story's heading nonetheless.

D'awww, warm fuzzies first thing in the morning is good.

I honestly thought that it was going to be humanXPrincess Luna ship there.......

Glad to be of service

a very touching beginning to a very touching tale... i love it...

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