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After his wife's death, Big Macintosh never thought that love would knock on his door again, until he began to communicate virtually with an anonymous pony, with whom he immediately feels a connection.
At the same time, after going through a difficult divorce process, Marble Pie is convinced by her sister to try to love again and has renewed hope in her heart when she meets an anonymous pony. But both are not even aware that they already knew each other.
Meanwhile, Chee Chee and Bright Mac the second admit that after years of close friendship, they've fallen in love, but are unsure about the idea that their families can be related and that what they feel for each other is a forbidden feeling.
To help her older brother, Apple Belle along with her best friends Rocky, her twin cousins Andesite and Branchina and the youngest of them all, Buttercup, go on a quest to find out if their families are really related or not.
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Chapters (16)
Comments ( 13 )

10613945
Thank you, I'm glad you like it ^^

10614018
That's awful, I hope everything's okay there with y'all

I'm a little surprised this story is a tragedy. The synopsis makes it sound like it isn't.

10626524
It's both tragedy and happy, but a lot of good things will happen, I promise ;)

10626524
Then tags are for everything that is in the story. A happy ending doesn't mean tragic events don't happen along the way. I mean makes it clear SugarBelle dies, clearly a tragic event.

10637422
Yeah, I didn't quite understand what you means, but that's why I put "drama" and "tragedy" tags

@SweetCarol you know Lil' Cheese is confirmed to be a colt, right?

10643375 I like to think that they let each of the viewers decide that. I mean, I read somewhere that in the script they don't specify whether Lil 'Cheese is a colt or a filly, they said it's a colt, but it was obviously designed with a filly design, so I decided it would be a girl.

Twilight watched them from a distance, they were so sweet to each other, it almost made her want to meet her other half too. Almost. They communicated to princess and she quickly ordered a group of guards to search in every corner of Canterlot to see if the 5 little girls were there.

either Twilight already got another half, but her work as the ruler is keeping her away from her/him...

or she doesnt have one and almost wish she had one....

kinda hope on the first one.... and then i wounder who it is :moustache:🤔

10703203
In this story she doesn't have one, but she's not worry about it, she has her friends and her family

10703594
Oh... Well... One could have hope 😉
Still a good story

It looks promising and very good, I will read it later, I will see what happens, I am sure it will be very good, forgive me if there are Misspellings in this comment, I have a very bad English, I use the translator to write this, and well, about the fanfic, google translates it to me to be able to read it , well I hope you have very good days, afternoons or nights, also all the other readers who are reading this comment.

This is a very heartwarming story you made. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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