For years, Pepperdance and her humble pepper farm have been slipping into obscurity. Her once-famous peppers now go largely unsold in the Ponyville market. Facing poverty, Pepperdance is forced to sell her farm and finds herself working for the Apple family. What will she do when she finds she has feelings for her employer- and the cause of her current troubles?
---Gather 'round, child'n, it's story time. No, I'm not talking about the fic, I'm talking about the origination of the fic. I was at Walmart with a few friends to get some blindbags. I got two, and waited to get back to my friends car before opening 'em. First was Rainbow Dash, and I was like, "meh, that's cool." Next one, I had expected an Applejack (may have cut a *tiny* hole in the bag with my pocket knife to check. Call the cops, IDGAF), but imagine my surprise when I found a random recolor in her place. Needless to say, I was raging the whole ride home, and my friends have been teasing me about it since.
First fic, so comment, criticize, and poke fun at. I need and enjoy feedback.
Cover image "borrowed" from http://durpy.deviantart.com/
Please forgive that ill put together back story at the beginning. It was supposed be put in a later chapter, but one of my friends, whom I had read this earlier, was confused as to who Bass was. Also, short chapter is short.
Don't expect a regular or even a semi-regular posting schedule; I'll post new chapters whenever I'm able to.
Comments, questions, concerns? Just leave a comment, I'd really appreciate it.
Bilbo Baggins?
I like what I'm seeing so far. I got a Pepperdance blind bag too, and I liked her. Glad to see someone else is making use of the character opportunites afforded by the toyline.
this was kindof a cheap effort
jus' saiyan
I found your story Starky, you silly pony you
but peppers?
I follow him into the kitchen and I see him fill up two owls with cereal. Hah, funny mistake is funny. It seems like some letters are missing throughout your piece.
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What about him?
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Sorry, I'll try harder in the future. The later chapters I have written now are much better, though. I just need to type them out.
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Damnit, you found me.
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Broken keyboard is broken. I'll be sure to fix those, thanks.
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Darn. Hoping butt peppers was a real thing.
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Don't we all?
Incredibly short chapter is incredibly short.
I like what I see so far, your OC is beleivable enough to have sort of a connection to her, but the story could use just a cleaning up here and there. A few missed capitlzations and such. Also, you might want to work on expanding your chapters, but I am hoping to see more as I see that this could be a great story.
Once again longer, but still looking forward to reading more.
Its good
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Don't worry about it. Write what needs to be written and the chapter will be the right length. Make a chapter that doesn't need to be long long and it will be boring with little to nothing happening.
Alright, a few questions, concerns, and comments I have:
1. Am I overdoing it on the Apple family's accents?
2. Again, if you see any typos, mistakes, or mishaps of grammar, be ruthless about it in the comments.
3. I have absolutely no clue where I'm going with this fic. I'm writing it chapter-by-chapter, and I'm not really planning ahead; you know something happens almost as soon as I do. If this fic crashes and burns somewhere along the line, don't say you weren't warned.
4. Any news on season 3? I'm getting a little anxious.
That's about it, hope to get chapter 4 written and released by sometime next week.
Love,
Stark.
Apparently Season 3 has only 13 episodes.
Don't see too many fics starring the blind bag ponies, so I'll definitely give it a read.
You updated
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Yeah, it's a thing I do sometimes.
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That's good, otherwise I'd have to eviscerate you and use your intestinal track as a condom while I fornicate with your skull.
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That is by far the most disturbing thing anyone has ever said they would do to me ever.
>Haven't updated in almost 2 weeks
>People still liking/favoriting story
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>What?
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>get chapter 4 written and released by sometime next week.
Dafauq is goin on man. Do you want me to write it for you? Cause I can and it will include somepony being put through the building you live in
How I, a Stark, even write new chapter?
Sorry everyone. I promise, I am currently working on it, but it's gonna be late. I have a lot of stuff going on with life right now and not a lot of time for writing.
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Hey, I put a pony through the building you live in. Twice
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My poor house. Comment with a link to your fic so my readers know what your even talking about.
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I keep giving you shout-outs, where's mine?
ps. Half of your readers are my readers too
I'll see if I can plug you into the next chapter somehow.1385292
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Sweet, and I'll make sure to remove a part of your house again.
Psssssst 1209409 guess what?
Butt peppers.
Hey guys! Glad to finally update, it's been a busy month for me. Stuff with school, family... Oh, I also joined the National Guard. That's pretty noteworthy. Private Stark... Has a nice ring to it. Anyways, you guys know the drill: read and review.
Oh hey sorry about this guys, but I've been asking this question on all of my accounts:
If someone can send me some links to pics of ponies-- ANY PONY I don't care at this point-- with braces I will be eternally grateful.
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First: First
Second: Its about damn time.
Third: Sorry, there are no Octavia's with braces.
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First: Go kill yourself
Second: Sorry blame the Guard
Third: Meh.
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You only hate me cause you can't have me.
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I hate you because you refuse to realize that Luna is best pony.
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If Luna is best pony, then why doesn't she appear in more than six episodes?
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Because fuck you. Quality over quantity.
True, but you still haven't paid me for the last fuck
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And your not gonna get payed. I was sorely disappointed with your performance.
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That's not what your mom said last night
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The funniest part about that is that you haven't seen what my mom looks like.
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No, the funniest part about this is that we have never met even though we both know Carmen.
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No, the funniest part about this is that the only people from the group I've met irl is CJ, Vince, Jamie, and Jhalen yet we all seem to be great friends.
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I know only three of you, so its not much better
You know, it would be a nice change of pace to actually do something here instead of argue with me. Seriously, do you need help writing this story cause I'm bored with my two. All I can do these days is troll people and play Farcry 3. In that order. Also, they took away my extra emoticons and that makes me sad. Now I don't have any Luna, Lyra, Spitfire, Vinyl, or Octavia ones.
Yo this thing is like 2 years old and I'm just now getting around to finishing it. I hope all y'all have still been waiting for it.
Jasper bro, me and a few other people have been wondering what happened to you. Could you PM me the details?