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totallyme6


I'm Joanne, an MLP fan who's especially fond of the Dazzlings.

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Adagio Dazzle, Aria Blaze, and Sonata Dusk have overall gotten back on their feet since their defeat after Rainbow Rocks. Now they have jobs and live comfortably and happily. But what if there was a chance to get the pendants that were so important to them back, though? How will the events unfold?

Disclaimer: I don’t own MLP or its’ characters in any way, shape or form.

First time writing fanfic; please don’t be too harsh!

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 5 )

A little pop noise snapped her out of her thoughts of all the dreaded work she'd have to do today, and she grabbed her toast and hot coffee.

Fastest toaster in the west. Fast enough to pull her out of thoughts she hasn’t even had yet.
Other than that, the chapter is alright. Maybe kinda short though...

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Haha, I guess Adagio's toaster is hyper-speed. (It probably runs just as fast as Rainbow is when she's flying!) I can see why you find the chapter short since a lot of fanfics on this site are pretty long, but this is my first time writing fanfiction. Personally, I read more fanfic on Fanfiction.net and am used to shorter chapters. Anyway, you're welcome to read chapter 2 to get the full '1,496 words' in my story so far!

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a question, wasn't it Monday? Why does adagio say it's Thursday on the bus?

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Oh my! I guess Adagio~ forgot what day it was in the first chapter! Thanks for letting me know, I'll fix it right away!

Sonata is like an antsy six year old and I’m absolutely here for it.

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