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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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Ever since arriving into the human world, Sunset Shimmer would sometimes have strange dreams of foggy images in her sleeps. Some years later after having a bad fight at Canterlot High which resulted in going into a coma, Sunset finds herself in a dark large castle and someone by the door. While walking around to find the figure, she finds an old treasure chest and opens it up, showing a weird crest and a mysterious whip weapon before everything around her went to blank. She woke up a week later in the hospital and in her left palm hand, it shows the black cloth with the same crest symbol she saw in her last dream.

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I like this story so far can't wait to see what will happen next if people don't like the idea of Equestria Girls Castlevania to bad for them this is your story not theirs as Bob Ross says "This is your world and you can do anything you want to do in it." Will Sunset have magic in this story or is Twilight going to be her magic using partner?

Happy new year from Psinet

So what amounts to a Portrait of Ruin crossover? Nice, consider this story tracked.:yay:

All I got from the mess that you have as the description, is that this is a Castlevania crossover, and Sunset is the main character. And that's it.

NOT a good way to start a story.

Heres some constructive criticize about your story so far. Pace yourself with how you add plot points into the story because from what I just read the story jumps to a new part every other sentence which can leave the reader confused with what is happening

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