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Big Whoops


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As a princess, Twilight would just like one day free of life outside the crystal walls of her castle. With another holiday here, she celebrates with her fellow princesses, her family, her friends, and some of their families. Sparkle should have known things couldn't be that simple as her friends invite her to open a gift in her library away from the other guests. She doesn't respond well.

Contains unknowingly innocent, promiscuous, purple ponies.

Constructive criticism for first-timers is appreciated. No funny business, buster.

Edited to my convenience and self-satisfaction. Should do more though just because...

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So did the others stage an intervention, or what did they do at the beginning? :twilightoops:

“Excuse me sir, I’ll have two number 9s, a number 9 large, a number 6 with extra dip, a number 7, two number 45s, one with cheese, and a large soda, please.”

All you had to do was follow the damn train, CJ!

Spoilers may be fun in comments, but please don't use them in the story. It's rather distracting and you have to take the time to move your mouse/finger/stylus/potato wedge/etc. to it.

I'm not entirely sure what the Mane 6 were doing. Did they tell Twilight about Discord's comment or something? Could've been clearer.

The vignettes were really nice, though!

“Excuse me sir, I’ll have two number 9s, a number 9 large, a number 6 with extra dip, a number 7, two number 45s, one with cheese, and a large soda, please.”

THIS IS TWICE I'VE SEEN THIS

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