Rainbow Dash has to spend Hearthswarming injured and full of self doubt, while Applejack is there to lend her some help, and a warm mug of cider to comfort her.
Thanks to Nailah for her lovely audio reading!
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Apparently more proofreading is required on my end lmao. Thanks for pointing it out.
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Thanks for the kind words! Not my first time writing ever, I've got a life time of scribbles, but this is the first published thing.
This was a very charming little tale of Rainbow Dash's struggle, as Applejack is the voice of reason.
I admire the way you've weaved this little tale. Each line feels like it serves a purpose.
Though if i had one small very little nitpick, it's that we never saw what happened to Dash to cause her blindness. Though I suppose we don't need to see it.
Anyways, this is a great way to start and I'm eager to see where you go from here.