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Starlight Glimmer and Sunburst are new parents. They are also immensely powerful unicorns with a penchant for going overboard. These things don't mix very well.


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The cry of a child coming from inside prompted Twilight’s ears to perk up. “Oh someone isn't enjoying the horn ache. I suppose I could just disrupt your spell…” Twilight grinned to herself. “Or I could use this opportunity to play with the cute baby.”

Considering that by this point Flurry Heart has grown a little, Twi's been waiting for this chance.

“Do you want to reinforce the basic shielding more?” Sunburst inquired, running a hoof through his beard. “If we tied the houses’ natural defences into the leylines beneath the town our home should be able to harness enough magic to cast a fifth level shield spell in less than three picoseconds.”

I think this is the 1st fic I've read that uses "picoseconds". Most other fanfics use (milli)seconds to describe quick events, which is horrifically long in comparison

They are also immensely powerful unicorns with a penchant for going overboard.

Starlight I can understand, but when has Sunburst ever "gone overboard" or shown any signs of being "immensely powerful"?

Jest #4 · Dec 24th, 2020 · · 1 ·

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Being a parent changes you.

This was adorable

Aw! Such overprotective parents! They'll be calmer if they have a second one.

Also

“I thought it was only a year?” Starlight replied, recoiling from the stallion and shooting him a look.

“It was at least two years,” Sunburst claimed, only to frown. “But now that we’re thinking about it maybe we should check the supply, just in case.”

“Good thinking,” Sunburst agreed.

Pretty sure you mean "Starlight agreed".:twilightsmile:

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Well Twilight did envision them accidentally destroying the Crystal Empire, if not the world, if they got together (which makes you wonder what her reaction was to making him Vice-Headmaster of the school).

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Their names are too godamn similair. Fixed.

“It's fine Sunset, I don't mind lending a hand,” Twilight exclaimed, smiling gently. “Besides, it takes a village to raise a child.”

Its starlight right?

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I typed star and sun so many godamn times they stopped being words for me. Ty.

Comment posted by LightningStrike34 deleted Dec 24th, 2020

Fun read, I will always take a bit more StarBurst in my life.

Speaking of such:

The room was bigger than any of which Starburst had even as a young adult

This totally isn't something I've done myself.

“It's fine Starlight, I don't mind lending a hand,” Twilight exclaimed, smiling gently. “Besides, it takes a village to raise a child.”

Lyra: Hannndddsss?! 😍

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