Rarity is a pony with an immense beauty. Some say she is the most beautiful mare in all of Equestria and an example of femininity.
However, why she cannot have a stallion as her lover?
Why her attractive apperance and feminine traits gets the attention of stallions but never manages to go beyond than just that?
Does Rarity truly knows how to make a stallion her boyfriend?
Is the reason why she has none her own fault?
Or is this the stallions fault?
Perhaps both?
This story my contain some language not appropriate to be rated "E", but it will not be too vulgar to get the mature rate as well. Othe than this, enjoy my semi-vent story.
Image was a screenshot i took from a gif made by DocWario.
Chapters (1)
Interesting concept of a story. No offense to her, but I did think Rarity was the sort who's kinda a bit too obsessed with perfection to actually meet a partner who would match her standards.
It’s rather sad that Rarity never found a stallion... but I do agree with 10655968 that she is to obese over perfection for a partner. Probably why stallions haven’t gone up to her because they probably believe they can’t be up to bar to be the partner she wants them to be.
Well, it's a good story for a new writer, but the grammar obviously needs work. Rarity's narrative also felt a bit off. My suggestion is to read more stories on Fimfiction about Rarity to improve how you write her. In the meanwhile, don't give up on your writing and keep believing in yourself!
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Believe or not, i have been writing for almost 5 years now, but i agree that my grammar needs work. I am a non-english speaker so grammar is always going to be my problem, but as someone who said to me before, the more i write and read, the better i might become.
Rarity's narrative feeling off and not sounding like her it's intentional. The second chapter that i am gonna create for this story it's going to explain why.
I also appreciate your kind words
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There could be other reasons too. Rarity always seemed to be a flawed pony to me.
Rarity in many ways is pony that can probably repel many stallions who also have their own standards.
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I'm interested in where you're going with this fanfic. I still can't see it yet. I'll see what happens.
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That’s very true that they have their own standards. But to me it’s always been very odd... that M6 never gets any stallions attention because they are heroes and I would think they get letters or flowers from them at least unless they understand that being near the M6 is basically pushing them to live a life of facing “End of the World” and “Monster Attack” situations
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Poor gals!
Yeah that always seemed strange to me.
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Funny how there’s not a fanfic base on a comedy about that. Would be a fun to read and probably be a one chapter short
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I'm pretty sure that in the show at least, they never get that kind of attention specifically because the writers want to avoid the No Hugging, No Kissing trope. Notice how pretty much none of them appeared prominently in the episodes based on Valentine's Day.