I'm writing rhyming poetry about many ponies and creatures in the world of Equestria and more. (including Equestria Girls). I will be writing many poems of each chapter. This is where my rhyming poetic journey begins.
Warning: Expect some explicit language.
I'm confused. This story sounds like an anthology, but there isn't an anthology tag.
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I'll put a tag on after this.
Wait, it say that he/she got his/her inspiration from zecora, and then says he/ got his/her poetic logic from manehattan, so which one is it?
We’re you rhyming suit with look?
How does that work?
Spoiled Rich?
But, does he know the cloud walking spell?
Airport? Also, what were you rhyming work with? Because, I think I missed it.
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It's pretty much both. He gets inspired by Zecora later on, and then works on writing poetry for bits.
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Ohh
Damn, is he just friends with everyone?
I don’t see why you can’t make it more grim.
Who is he talking about?
Nice
Are they dating, now?
Then, what was with the kiss?
Were you rhyming Las Pegasus with Las Pegasus?
This is gonna get so bad.
How is that good?
Why didn’t they tell him?
She belongs to the streets.
Go ahead, I don’t think anyone is gonna stop you.
Hey, they got more fish in the sea. Or more ponies in the herd.
What does that mean?
Like I said, she belongs to the streets.
Was that meant to rhyme?
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I just re-edit that rhyme. Thanks for pointing it out.
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You’re welcome
Omg, yes. I love the idea of rap about mlp, I was actually wondering when someone would do that. Plus, anime and mlp? Two amazing and popular things? I’m all for it.
The verse was short, but not bad.
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I'm actually going to make a story based on either Tenchi Muyo, Dragon Ball Z/Super, or Rurouni Me shin. Might just try to blend them in together.
Wow, this was very heartwarming.
Wow, this was good.
This is amazing.
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I figured you'd liked it. I wasn't sure if you liked that I shipped Filthy Rich with Marble Pie, since her chance with Big Mac are gone. So I hope you liked that.
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I did. And although the ship seems odd because of the possible age gap, I can learn to accept it.
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Sunset Shimmer and Starlight Glimmer
Not bad.
Inspirational.
I think I need a cover of this.
Aww, that’s so sweet.
Luna was probably one of the best parts about mlp.
Pretty good! There were some hiccups and inconsistencies here and there, but all in all, the chapter flowed really nicely and made sense. Just watch out for the occasional typos or editing leftovers, such as corArabia or Yakyakastan. Also, it's best to avoid putting an author's note at the beginning of the opening chapter, since it bogs it down needlessly. You want people to immediately dive into the story so that you can hook them.
Poetry is a true magic which makes our lives brighter. I needed an inspiration for my paper and found it on the fimfiction site :)
Also, I was using this resource https://samplius.com/free-essay-examples/poetry/ to get the samples for my papers.
I think all of us need to get motivation to learn any subject.
I can’t think of many creatures with unicorn traits.
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It's a creature no pony or creature heard of before, and it's not in the franchise. When I write a new rhyme in chapters to come, you'll find out in the future. Can't say it now, you'll have to wait until then.
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Oh ok
What’s the difference between a city and town?
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In the city, you don't see many stars, cuz of the lights. Some towns have lights, but you can see the stars better, since towns don't have many lights like the city. That's my opinion.
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Oh ok
Interesting
This was so sweet.
Really good
It’s nice he gave the bits to charity.
He for the streets. Or the pony equivalent of that.
That’s adorable.
This was great.