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AuroraDawn


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In an unfortunate work accident, Calamus--a weather pegasus--has lost his hearing. His lifelong friend Syrinx volunteers to teach him Pegasus Sign Language, and in the process the two learn more about each other than either expected.


Special thanks to SunlightRays, Emotion Nexus, Nitro Indigo, and the lovely Holtinater for editing assistance, Mushroom for prereading, and the rest of the Quills and Sofa's server for help on all the little details.

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Comments ( 18 )

Beautiful. Flockin' beautiful. Loved the story, and once again, you've proven to yourself and to all of us that you're fit to call yourself a writer...

This was flocking cute.

I'll admit that the names threw me a little, but that was minor. What's important is that it was a heartfelt story, adorable and touching. Nicely done.

Hold on. He’s featherspelling. The first feather was I, and then L, and O, and now he’s--

No.

My tears are completely pouring now, soaking his back. I can’t believe it.

I-L-O-V-E-Y-O-U-T-O-O.

i gasped aloud even though i knew it was coming

this is absolutely spectacular

wonderful job, really

Amazing, and beautiful. I loved this little story. Came after a few days of pondering a similar character but I think you did this kind of thing more justice than I could.

The descriptions of the sky were beautiful!

and in the process the two learn more about each other than either expected.

I've read way too many clopfics.

One big difference between polish and english is that beside the story's description we do not get any information on Calamus' gender. In the middle of reading this I've already forgotten what gender this person was, because I thought it was 'he', but it was conflicting with my thought of 'adding homosexual characters in this story is a little too much'. I like how cute it turned out to be in the end.

It seems like you've achieved what you wanted Aurora, you wrote a great fic that really opens people's eyes on how deaf people feel and function. And all that with no words spoken out loud. You really managed to make this a very special read, one that I feel will be fatured on equestriadaily.

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I hope it’s not too much because they are gay though :D

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It's not that.
For some reason I thought you wouldn't write it this way.

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Thank you much, I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Oh gosh this was absolutely adorable.

Now this was good. Had me smiling despite myself from the halfway point onwards. I used to never like romance novels in the slightest, but for mlp fics? I'll eat it up regardless of who or what it is, so long as its good.

And you my friend, have written something so good I could feel the silence of the narrative while I was reading it, and that immersed me into this little relationship so deeply that I am beyond happy with how it all finished.

Bravo.

You know, I wish I had read this sooner.

Because it's amazing. You painted Calamus' pains and worries perfectly, and the way Syrinx supported him through everything was refreshing. So much happened in that little outburst Calamus had, it was a well made turmoil. That said, I was smiling the whole way though through, and even though it's a bit cliché (this isn't bad at all) I still shed a tear when Syrinx reciprocated Calamus' feelings.

Great job.

Howdy, hi~!

This was a really sweet read. I love the sign language, it was really well portrayed, and the struggle on display. Really enjoyed the chemistry between the two main leads too. This was just a really warm fluff piece with a really rad language development.

Thanks for the read~!

I keep coming back to this one every few months it's such a wonderful story. It has a wonderful emotional build up with a spectacular payoff.

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