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Pretty good story and gripping

So what about Sunset, she was Celestia's student BEFORE Twilight, does that mean she also drank tea with Celestia's milk in it?

So she found the source of Ambrosia the meal of the gods :trollestia:

Hmm interesting. Pregnancies drasticly increase milk output. Lets hope we see some of that.

Tek

I could see a comedy ending for this that in trying to find ways to get her friends to consume the milk she turns it into all sorts of diary products, cheese, ice cream, etc. And in the end finds in cases where a pony doesn't become an alicorn it still improves health and longevity and opens a business and improves everypony's health selling alicorn milk dairy products.

I like where this is going. please continue.:rainbowkiss:

That took a turn that I was not expecting.

Well, thats kinda celestia fault and problem

Don't think I didn't notice that Grey Council reference.

Did she even briefly consider asking? Or that there were four other adult alicorns, plus humans who might be mirror-transformable into alicorns? Or that she knows a transformation spell? Or that there's a mirror pool?

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I look forward to a remake of that show...

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As much as I would love to have a remake of B5, it's not gonna happen. Even if it does, it just won't be the same. So many of the original cast are now gone. Even JMS said that. I'll settle for an update of the special effects.

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Aye. If you go on youtube there are some folks doing 4k reworks of various scenes.

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Will do when I get home from worj and can access my search history.

Is this supposed to be marked as Incomplete?

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I assume you guys saw the release of the official remaster. Though I don't know whether "upscaled" means they used modern AI interpolation or just literally resized it.

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So from what I could tell, they released it in the original tv format that it was filmed for. The dvd box sets were using a botched widescreen format that was at times pretty clunky and awkward. They also cleaned up the footage and such, as you would expect from a remaster.

What the fuck did I just read?

When I first read the title, I first thought the story is about the product sold by Nestle.

res.sastasundar.com/incom/images/product/Nestle-Milkmaid-1573284199-10040149-1.jpg

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Si far my patrons haven't voted for another chapter yet. Slaves to Darkness is getting updated this month.

twilight finally got what she deserved, nice

Sweet new chapter, but I got to ask, any chance that Sunset Shimmer might show up?

shining and twilight's friends are not going to be happy if they find out, then agian aj might follow mac

It took a while to get it, but this chapter certainly met all my expectations. Guess all that's left now is to wait for the other ending.

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Doubtful, to be honest.

Well, that was hot and karmic ;) Nice one!

Maybe Starlight has a change of heart eventually... Either way, something tells me the alicorns are in for years of milking. Kinda makes me wonder about their daily schedule.. Just how long each session is... And what Starlight's ownership's gonna be like. Gonna get extra sensitive eventually, too, as the sessions get longer :twilightblush:

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