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So that's what reaaly happened!

This is pretty clever!

It's like the episode of MASH where Hawkeye is put in command of the 4077th; I half-way expected Celestia to ask Nightmare Moon "Oh, returning to the scene of the crime, are we?" before enumerating what she hates about her daffier subjects: "The cross-eyed mailmare with the muffin fixation, the preening idiot who happens to be her she-wishes-he-was-way-more-distant nephew and, oh, yes, the lavender unicorn who gives off the creepy stalker vibe." :pinkiehappy:

This is awesome! :heart: Of course, I am easlily swayed because this is a more extreme version of my CANON Celestia (I've had it up to here with this tyrant Celestia claptrap), but the story is also very well-written, and I enjoy how Nightmare Moon, full of righteous fury, is reduced to "bwah" in front of a different kind of Celestia-fury.:raritystarry:

This fic was damn hilarious!

The more you know...:rainbowlaugh:

HA! i loved it when the ponies screamed it was going to be night eternal, till luna said "no, as long as it takes me to figure out how to raise the sun". great stuff!


You sir, have just given me a crossover idea.....

Which I will gladly leave to another author as I am busy with another fic....

Of course, what else? They just made up whole 'elements freed me' later, when Nightmare talked some sense into Celestia (read: plead her to return)

Why thank you! *puts on his smarty pants*

Part of my motivation to write fic was that 'tyrant' claptrap. Try to do double-work in millenia, we'll see how much time you'll find to be tyrannical when you only have 4 free hours to sleep.

Nightmare: Why, how she move that giant warm fluffy ball? AARRRRGHH Move dammit!

Loved it!
I am pretty sick of the usual Tyrantmotrollestia BS, so this was a big breath of fresh air.

This amuses me :moustache:

I love when a story goes off the rails, and this one can't even see them from where it landed. I especially like your characterization of Nightmare Moon as a more complex being than just "RAWR NITE WILL LAST 4EVR :flutterrage:" A fantastic ficlet.


Celestia: okay.jpg
NMM: ...wait, what?

This is great I am defiantly keeping my eye on this story. :pinkiehappy:

Oh god, we need more.

Very fun reading, I totally love celly/woona sisterly quarrels ^_^

Interesting read. Keep an eye on your use of quotation marks when a speaker is quoting. It gets a little confusing in a couple parts where the spoken line ends. :raritywink:

Consider following this example:
"It was so funny the way she said 'oatmeal? Are you crazy?' I laughed so hard."

I hope this helps. :twilightsmile:

This is easily the funniest fic I've ever read.:ajsmug:

Hah, well done. I like the cut of your jib. That was quite amusing.

... I'm not quite sure what I just read...
I enjoyed it, but something felt... Off... Not sure what though

I'm too tired to be thinking anyway... Why am I online this late?:facehoof: I should go to sleep


Go sleep well and dream of ponies, bro)

32994 Okay, now that i've actually slep, i've figured out what was off.
You have a very solid concept here, but this story is far too breif. I mean, I am a defender of the shortstory, but this felt a little TOO short. There is quite a lot you could do with this though, and I did enjoy reading it, so you did something right there:pinkiesmile:


yeah, I'm trying to write part 2, but you know, I have a bunch of scenes and NO solid plot. NO FUCKING PLOT. so sorry, don't know when i'll write something else. thanks for review.

And this is why I would never attempt to rule. Just too much work!
Awesome story though! :pinkiehappy:

hee hee Celestia snaps, so amusing.


NNM just rain into the mental brick wall. This happens whenever there's a "Wait what?!" moment occuring. And man is it freaking awesome to read those. Pretty much the comediac equivalent of the HELL YES! moment.

Well, this is a shining case of: "Be careful what you wish for."


More please :pinkiehappy:

How about something involving NMM pleading Celestia to return and the whole 'Elements Of Harmony' bullshit to cover up for Celestia's absence.

Well, when my exams end i'll think about it))


Not my kind of story

very, VERY clever story! sweet way to turn the tide on NMM! lmao at Celestia's tantrum!

hah, thanks) People still read this? Lol))

This was awesome on so many levels

This was great XD
be careful what you wish for... :pinkiecrazy:


I just love this! No more is needed, just, PERFECT!

Five Star!

:rainbowlaugh: Clever. Rood read.

Heh. Well done. Very well done.



Hehe. This joke was done pretty much exactly the same in the webcomic Bruno The Bandit, where the Evil Wizard of the cast got it in his head that he wanted to take over the kingdom. The king just laughed in his face, dug out the beach balls and his swimming pants, called the whole court together and left. :rainbowlaugh:

I don't know if you actually read that, but either way, this story applies the same concept to Equestria and Nightmare Moon quite brilliantly :twilightsmile:

:twilightsmile: Very funny, I want to read more.

I keep hearing the old song 'Take This Job and Shove It' whenever I read or reread this.

This... this made me LOL. Celestia is having a field day with this!

Celestia is happy. :trollestia:

One your name is genius and two your story is great
plus believable
and funny


Avatar pic+Comment=Hilarity :rainbowlaugh:

Eheheheh, that was hilarious.

There was no movement on this story since 96w? O.o
What a shame for a good story!

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