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Starlight Fan


I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.

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Chrysalis almost tears Spike’s wings out until Twilight stops her in blind rage. But Spike is in a horrible state, and is just barely clinging to life and Everypony is worried about him, especially Twilight.

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Twilight then calmed down and was shocked at what she just did, and saw what she just did to the trio and for some reason she felt no remorse or sympathy for them in fact she felt satisfied, they almost took the thing most important to her and she was not happy. She took the bell and then used a spell she remembered when reading on ancient artifacts and drained the three creatures of their magic, they were still alive but they will pay for their crimes.

Those Three most DEFINITELY deserve it! :twilightangry2: I hope Spike is okay. :fluttershysad:

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Oh he will be okay eventually, don’t worry but his current state will affect many of the characters. So what’s you think so far?

Oh my God that's horrifying what Chrysalis did to spike even in the real show it was still kind of brutal that she was going to do it if Twilight and the others doesn't give up but anyway after Twilight blasting those Legions of Doom her and the other main five checked on Spike if he's okay and well not really and not only that he is close to death if they don't get them to the hospital luckily the other creatures and ponies to help out the situation so now the recovery for Spike begins i hope he's going to be ok

I wonder how the young six discord big mac Gabby ember thorax pee wee ( the Phoenix that Spike protected ) Celestia Luna garble little heartstrong and crystal ponies of the crystal empire and the ponies and creatures feel about what happened to spike I guess we'll find out next time

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Yes Spike will have lots of friends and family concerned for him.

I sound like a bad person saying this, but what would happen if Chrysalis did tear off Spike's wings?

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Spike goes to the afterlife.

Twilight then calmed down and was shocked at what she just did, and saw what she just did to the trio and for some reason she felt no remorse or sympathy for them in fact she felt satisfied, they almost took the thing most important to her and she was not happy. She took the bell and then used a spell she remembered when reading on ancient artifacts and drained the three creatures of their magic, they were still alive but they will pay for their crimes.

Those three will not get away with this. I hope Spike is going to be all right.

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Oh he will be fine trust me, but he will be in pain for a while.

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Not necessarily. I mean, it depends on what else got ripped off. Spike would still be able to live, but I think there'd be a slim chance of survival. But how would everyone react if Spike did die?

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Twilight would have gone into depression for a very long time but not to the extreme.

Applejack and Rainbow Dash would miss him but eventually get over it.

Fluttershy would have missed him and would have gained PTSD.

Pinkie Pie and Rarity would also gain depression but get over it sooner.

Should I tell you Starlight and Discord’s reaction.

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Starlight would be crushed by the news since Spike was a good friend of her’s but she’d power through it, and help Twilight recover.

Discord would probably be super depressed and blame himself and Fluttershy would help him get through it.

Comment posted by chazkopa deleted Dec 18th, 2020

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Yeah, I agree for the most part. But I don't think Applejack and Rainbow would just miss him and eventually get over it. That's like saying the Cutie Mark Crusaders died in front of Cheerilee but she didn't get any trauma from it.

In fact, I think all of them would be traumatized by it! I mean, MLP has a kill count of two (in my count), and that's for Sombra and the Storm King. Both of whom are villains. Witnessing someone who's been with you get killed would cause some mental problems in the future.

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I never said they’d stop missing him, they’d just move on, but you are right.

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I hope so.

I only hope Chrysalis, Cozy and Tirek will get what coming to them.

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Just to be clear, I also never said anything about them not missing Spike anymore. But either way, I'm glad that the small dragon who was there at the very beginning is safe.

Tirek and Cozy Glow couldn’t help but feel a bit concerned for Chrysalis this may be a bit too far even for them and she seems to be enjoying it too much plus it was also gross.

It’s nice to know even villains have lines the don’t cross. I’m curious to know how this would affect them.

The Mane 5 gaped at Twilight she may have been powerful but they’ve never seen her like this before.

Forget the elements, this is more useful.

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Tirek and Cozy Glow were disgusted at seeing someone's love drained I think they would be revolted at the sight of blood.

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No, I mean what would they think? How would they think? What is their mindset? Would they think chrysalis is crazy? Would they think twilight was justified?

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Cozy Glow and Tirek would think Chrysalis went a bit too far and think Twilight was a bit justified. So I’ll go a bit easier on them.

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Also, I didn’t expect you to make this so early.

Tirek and Cozy Glow couldn’t help but feel a bit concerned for Chrysalis this may be a bit too far even for them and she seems to be enjoying it too much plus it was also gross.

When the other villains thinks that Crystal has gone too far you know there's something wrong with that

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I mean I know Applejack and Rainbow Dash are the tough ones but they can be a little concern for spike well being

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They are concerned for Spike, and would always miss him. I may have worded that wrong though.

The next chapter is out now, hope you enjoy.

After they went to the castle Twilight then gave Celestia and Luna back their magic, she considered giving Discord his magic back but decided not to for 5 months so he'd learn his lesson which Discord surprisingly understood and didn't object to.

Probably more than that after all the stunts he pulled I know he was trying to do when is right but that's the wrong way to do that and thanks to his supposably planned Spike got hurt because of him

Oh just an F y I i don't him hate but im mad at him

"This is all your fault you insensitive, chaotic, self-obsessed jerk, because of you Spike is in the hospital because Chrysalis almost tore his wings out." Rainbow Dash said in rage.

Insensitive? No
Chaotic? Definitely
Self-Obsessed Jerk? Maybe

After they went to the castle Twilight then gave Celestia and Luna back their magic, she considered giving Discord his magic back but decided not to for 5 months so he'd learn his lesson which Discord surprisingly understood and didn't object to.

At least he could some exercise. This man don’t do nothing but teleport.

"Let it go Tirek we lost again, but it wasn't our faults now was it." Cozy Glow who was back as a pegasus said while giving a silent glare at Chrysalis.

Tirek picked up on this and also gave Chrysalis a glare, "Yes if someone hadn't provoked Twilight we'd be sitting on decorative thrones, but you just had to try and rip out the dragon's wings."

That’s what they’re upset about?

"That is all I came to say, you will be allowed visitors can't imagine why someone would visit you monsters, but I feel like being generous." Luna added before leaving.

I can imagine a few.

"Whatever, he's alive so you probably might wanna rest, visitors are allowed, just holler if you need anything." Noah instructed. The two doctors left leaving Spike alone, until a visitor showed up through the door.

I’m curious to know who it is.

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I don’t hate Discord either, he’s in my Top 5 Best Characters, but I had to call him out.

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Tirek and Cozy Glow are also mad at Chrysalis for going a bit too far.

Also like I said you can give suggestions on who the visitor should be. Who do you want to show up first.

Well then at least they know so anyway Twilight and the others finally freed Celestia Luna Discord and starlight and the pillars out of the cage but they told him what happened to spike of course there was some mix-up resolved mostly sad confused and anger meanwhile spike is at the hospital resting and apparently that's going to be a first visit I wonder who that could be?

Anyway my last comment I suggested still stands

Shinning armor and pricess Cadence young six main 6 big mac Gabby ember thorax pee wee ( the Phoenix that Spike protected ) Celestia Luna garble little heartstrong starlight sunset Shimmer Trixie bon bon Lyra Moondancer and minuette twinkleshine lemon hearts the CMC and some of the crystal ponies of the crystal empire I mean I think that's all for now but I can think of a couple of characters who I missed

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Well which one should go first? I need to give each a special moment with the dragon.

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Well like I said I'm not sure but I guess if you want to you can start with the main 6 minus Twilight first

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I honestly don’t know. I would probably say ember or thorax, because they both got their own people to rule, so it would make sense for one of them to check up on spike before they go.

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Actually that's actually a good point because both of them have history with him

At least Spike is all right.

You know, I think the cutie mark crusaders should visit Spike after hearing what happened.

Bob and Noah doesn't sound like lore friendly names for ponies. However, "Pony Life" did play on the idea that ponies can have human names, but whatever.

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They aren’t too important to the plot so I shall name them as I please but fair enough.

The visitors walked in and were revealed to be Ember and Thorax. The latter immediately hugged Spike’s face.

I honestly didn’t expect BOTH of them to be there.

Ember noticed this and quickly added “But she’ll recover she’s pretty strong, right Thorax?”

Before Thorax answered he saw Ember look at him in anger letting him know he better do what she wants.

“Yep she’ll be fine.” Thorax lied fearfully.

I’d like to point out that technically he didn’t lie.

“You think I don’t care that he might not make it I do care Thorax, he’s my friend, my first friend actually. You don’t know what it was like to be an outcast.” Ember lamented.

“Actually I do, I may be a nice guy but the changelings weren’t always the way they were, before they reformed, Spike was my only friend at the time, he didn’t give up on me and kept trying to get the Crystal Empire to accept me, he risked everything for me. I never got a chance to repay him.” Thorax said sadly.

Oh yea, I forgot they had that in common.

It looks like the first visit is Ember and Thorax which it makes sense for them to visit him I mean throughout the conversation both of them really own Spike for the things that he done for both of them and it makes sense that both of them felt like their Outcast because of the way they think about their own kind ways but it looks like thorax felt like he should tell what Chrysalis does when she deals with her mortal enemies and pretty gruesome to I really wonder how Twilight and starlight would feel about this and I wonder who's next for the visiting I guess we'll find out next time

Remember you get to make suggestions on who visits Spike next, so start picking.

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Any characters who actually value Spike as a friend and not some fan brats(other than the guards they were likable also no offense).

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Sorry about that. Hold on, how's about Shining Armor and Princess Cadance?.

I'm sure Shining Armor will be told by Twilight about what happened to Spike.

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Well Gabby should visit as well after while they are pen pals after all and garble should visit as well he owes him that much as well and maybe the young six as well and Shining Armor and Cadence especially Big Mac as well and I wonder if Pee Wee should visit him as well

"Twilight, tell me it isn't true." Starlight begged.
"Unfortunately it is true, Spike is severely injured." Twilight answered.

Starlight: No! My backup future coltfriend :fluttershbad:
Twilight: You're what? :rainbowhuh:
Starlight: Nothing... :derpytongue2:

"Regardless you went a bit too far with what you did, I mean slow agonizing torture is just too cruel even for me." Tirek stated.

Even Tirek has standards.

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LOL that was good, you´d expect that from me wouldn´t you. Well I'll make them a couple in this story if the fans want it, I got many Sparlight ideas just waiting to come out in other stories.

How's about Garble and his friends?.

Starlight sighed and said “Honestly I feel empty, both of my best friends are suffering, Twilight’s been getting bad dreams about Spike dying, and Spike is in the hospital. So yeah I feel awful.”

Can we see those dreams?

“Oh laugh it up you two, at least I am actually trying to continue our plan.” Chrysalis argued.

Our?

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