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Scribe of the Nightwings


I am but a simple scribe. I write stories of the Nightwings, and how a purple alicorn and her friends led them to freedom. LOXALAS!

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This story is a sequel to Interruption and Intervention


A few months have passed since Princess Luna had a talk with her royal scribe, Astral Ink. Since then, the two had developed their friendship while maintaining efficient work in their royal duties. All was going well, until recently.
Astral finds himself in the dream of the alicorn herself as Luna initially attempts to aid in the scribe in another issue he's dealing with, while the stallion still struggles understand why the princess has so much care for him.
What follows is a series of revelations from both ponies that will forever change their relationship.


Thank you all for your patience! :twilightsmile:

Coverart by the incredibly talented NixWorld!

Featured on 12/16/20. Thank you all! :pinkiehappy:

Edit: A fantastic commission a made for a certain scene in Adoration was made by the ever-talented Little Tigress!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 33 )

Is Astral Ink related to Raven Inkwell?

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Nope, they're colleagues, though I can see where you're coming from. :twilightblush:

Excellent chapters!

You did an amazing job portraying Luna when she first returned to Equestria. And I absolutely enjoyed the scene with her first meeting Astral.

pretty sweet start.

Did Umbra Quill really exist, or was Celestia herself writing this book under that pseudonym?

I love this so far, it is very well written and the type of romance that I like the most- the romance that actually takes their course and time to happen rather than kinda just popping in and all sudden Luna or other characters falls in love for reasons unknown. Keep it up, dear chap!

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The perfect statement, her return is a gradual process- not sudden like other fanfics.

I loved your previous story and I’m really loving this one so far. Pretty wholesome writing overall.

Keep up the good work my good man :twilightsmile:

THERE ARE NO WORDS ON GOD'S GREEN EARTH THAT CAN DESCRIBE HOW SPECTACULARLY enthralled I AM

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:
I'm pretty satisfied with how that scene turned out myself. Though it was especially tricky writing up Luna's dialogue, with her old English and such.

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Thank you, that's actually my main goal with these fics. I came in knowing that it can be very tricky writing a story with a canon character falling in love with an OC with out it seeming self serving. So I wanted to really try to emphasize that Luna and Astral have a history that would explain why the two of them would have a strong relationship, be it friendship or something greater.

It's good to know that I seem to be hitting that mark! :twilightsmile:

The slight difference in height meant that Astral had his head nuzzled near the bottom crook of her neck while Luna took the opportunity to gently lay her head on the stallion’s white mane.

Stabby stabby horn

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Okay, I know that sounds a bit dangerous, but it is somewhat plausible .

So much fluff, aaaaaaa. Already awaiting for next chapter :D

events are gaining momentum.

“Eeeeeek! Aieeee! Awwwww!” *Mum calls mental health specialists outside room*

Seriously though, so heartwarming! And I love the way Astral joked about going to the moon at the end to make Luna feel better! *Swoons some more...*

Liked!

That was such an awesome and adorable story.
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Will you be working on a sequel to this next or will Pyres of Friendship be getting your full attention?

Diabetes well worth having :raritywink:

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:

I thought that line was pretty cute too. Wanted to really emphasize how much Luna means to Astral.

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Thanks for your continued support as always! :twilightsmile:

I do have some sequels planned for this strand of stories, but I'm going to be switching back to TPOF now. I was in the middle of the last chapter before I took a break, so I don't imagine it'll take too much time to finish, but who know.

“Aye, shove it up yer shit hole, ye bastard.”

Lol

Will there be another sequel to this? I loved how this and previous one was short but very sweet to read; alas realistic too.

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Thank you so much for your support!

I do still have some sequels planned for this story line. Some of which will be a bit...risque.. :raritywink:

“How bold of you, my faithful scribe.’ a sleepy voice suddenly said. Astral watched on in shock as he saw Luna turn her body so that she was facing him. Though sleepiness was still present in her eyes, the soft smile that she had on seemed to enhance her already radiant beauty. “Climbing into the bed with a sleeping mare in the middle of the night? Wherever did you acquire such a risky idea?”

it would be mega embarrassing if the invitation to share the bed with the princess actually turned out to be just a fantasy that the dream revealed.

Well this was a fun little read, it was nice seeing the Reason why Ink was so lethargic before.

Absolutely loved this story, looking forward to sequels you have in store!

Great story :pinkiehappy: congratulations.
I liked it from beginning to end :rainbowkiss: I think you developed the personality of Astral and Luna very well, and I think you have more talent than me to describe the environments (I think that not detailing the environments so much is a bad habit that I acquired to translate more easily :twilightsheepish:) so very well done :raritywink:
I also feel that you developed the romance between both of you very well :raritystarry:
Anyway, congratulations again and thank you for writing such a good story :twilightsmile:

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Thanks so much for giving it a read! :twilightsmile:
Praise from such a talented writer such as yourself means a whole lot to me. And don't feel too down on describing environments. It's certainly tricky for me and I know for sure that there a lot of other writers on the site that pull it off better. :twilightsheepish:
Still though, thank you so much for taking the time the read the story and I'm super glad that Astral and Luna feel very believable. :scootangel:

OK in my opinion the first half of the pic looks like she's eating his mouth but the second half looks like they're kissing:rainbowkiss:

Damn this is good. You got me craving more of this lol.

Hello there. We have completed a much overdue review for you over on My Little Reviews & Feedback. Enjoy! :twilightblush:

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