This story is a sequel to Spare Some Change?
Coco really loves Moondancer. She loved her with all her heart, all of her everything. If she loved her, why was it so hard to do? So much fighting, so much heart ache, but Coco still loved her no matter what.
Heart Scratch failed. She failed in keeping her daughter in line, failed in keeping her husband in line, and failed in keeping her business straight. Exiled to Stalliongrad, Heart starts anew, with a vengeance festering inside of her.
Art by: https://www.deviantart.com/ilightningstari/art/Coco-Pommel-547827443 Go check them out, they're awesome!!
Chapters (4)
Whoever does your art has a gorgeous style. Can't wait to get to this later.
I discovered Spare Some Change? after you'd already finished it, but I was excited to see the blog post about returning to writing pony fics and thinking about a sequel. And gosh, Coco x Moondancer is so gonna have been worth the wait :)
And I wonder how Moonie found herself working in a Stalliongrad boutique.
Love the setup so far. Looking forward to more, but feel free to take your time. Your last story was worth the wait.
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Ahhh thank you!!
And it shall come :)
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I love the ship idea and didn't see much of it so I wanted to make it come to life! And you'll see :)
i don't get it,
this is a good start and Spare Some Change was Great. so why is this not getting views?
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I dunno! Maybe people don't like the ship D:
Welcome back. This is the soundtrack to my drive to work in the morning.
She cares ^^
Poor Moonie. Can't be a great situation to find yourself in, when you struggle with body image issues.
Is she eyeballing it? Has Moondancer previously made an order at her shop? Or was there a slow day once, and she was like "Moonie, I'm bored. Let me sew something for you" XD
Felt rushed, but it works for the situation. I inferred a fairly unhinged moment from Coco, where with tired, yet intense eyes, she just sort of grabbed her. "Yes, you're perfect."eye twitch, eye twitch. "You're coming with me." Hollow, grostly tone. I'm not sure, but that's what I got and I like that there was enough literary wiggle room to interpret it. Appropriately rushed, so we're left to imagine certain things.
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ooo i love that interpretation! She may definitely be a 'little' stressed LOL
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She has ABSOLUTELY sewn something on Moondancer out of boredom one day, no question!
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maybe this one isn't for me. It's not getting any looks really, and most people don't seem to like it. Might not be one to continue ;.;
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That's too bad. But I get it, one of mine went flop a bit ago. Don't feel like you need to keep it going just for me.
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Aww, that's sad news :(
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Ill give it a bit of time! I don't just wanna be reactionary ,I appreciate y'all being here ♥
Good news; since the last story was so good, this one managed to get slotted right on top of the stories I’m binging. Let’s see how it goes.
So harsh it’s stopped two invasions by just being there.
This is a really good start. Sometimes, you just don’t stumble into the same fame you’ve had, but this is really cute nonetheless.
These two are adorable together.
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Thank you!
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I think I am gonna keep working on this :) I really appreciate yall and I hope you like what I've for coming!
Another sweet chapter. Or bittersweet this time.
Moondancer: Curie edition.
It’s adorable how highly she thinks of Coco.
At least she has realized what it is that's going on. Honestly, if imagine the list of ponies she'd do something like that for begins and ends with coco, as we've seen them in this story so far.
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It'll get happier, promise.
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They're best friends. Best. Friends. :D
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Yea, there isn't anyone else she'd put herself out there for. She's an anxious baby.