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Spike has had a secret for a long time. He is apart of the lgbt community and wants to let it out but he is afraid. He tells Twilight about it as he decides she should be the next pony to know since he told another pony before. What will be the outcome? He is very nervous to tell her. What will Twilight say?

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The king is back

"Listen to me very carefully....I DO NOT HATE YOU...I could never hate you! Do you understand hon? You are a beautiful human being I'll always support you Spike.

You are a beautiful human being

human being

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10581376 Yes I am indeed I really did try this time

10581388

It did feel like it had a lot more structure and thought put into it compared to your older stuff.

10581402 Thank you. Yeah I really worked at it I spent like quite alot of time writing it to I fleshed out the plot unlike my other stories and tried to make them in character as much as I could.

10581407
Good job man, keep it up

10581444 I really did try. I hoped you liked it 😊

Pretty good story, just need to add apostrophes when showing ownership or contractions.

But good story nonetheless

10581526 Got it. I'm glad you liked it :)

This is lovely and so are you :heart:

10581760 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Well, well, well... I never thought I would see you writing again.

Honestly, this story is full of grammatical errors with little to no use of commas at all. However, it is a sweet story.

that was good. surprised you didn't go with barb

10582862 Sorry about the errors I know I missed some but I'm glad you enjoyed it still

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barb is the name of the genderbend version of spike.

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