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BlueFin


When inspiration strikes...stories are written.

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Yeah the sex was nice, but you didn't tell us if that was actually the overflowing goblet or not! They should have tested it by emptying the condom in

OCs were fine, though Brick is an odd name, the banter and chemistry was good though the turnaround was rather quick. Sex was really abrupt, but I guess 'turned on by danger' is more interesting than the dime-a-dozen estrus based plots. I just wish the size difference was played on more

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Y'know....you right lol. To be honest by the end I was just so ready to be done, so adding that aspect-or delving more in the size difference- didn't cross my mind at the time of writing it. Will definitely think of having them actually interact with the artifact if I decide to make a sequel!

Arizona's name is obviously inspired by Indiana Jones, but since her dad is Rockhoof, I figured that "Brick" would be a decent tie in to the rock aesthetic. Still is a work in progress last name though! And thank you for the feedback!

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