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Bevon_1_Nub


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When an old threat rises up against the New Equestria, a land of peace and harmony, with every species of creatures resides. It is the sole, most powerful kingdom in the world. But, when an old threat from the Everfree Forrest, which has grown over a thousand years, to the point that not even the current immortal Princess Flurry Heart, and her daughter, Princess Twilight, can step in it without being harmed, Twilight must bravely enter the forest, under the protection of the Elements of Harmony, to save New Equestria. Also, if you send me a message in my user page with an idea to change the story line, I might use it.

Stories with the most amount of influence over this story (they were great, which is why I used them):

Go read them too, they're good.

I have a 1000 word goal for each chapter, too. Nope. Not any more.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

My name is Twilight Sparkle, daughter of the current Princess Flurry Heart.

Either it's not the Twilight Sparkle we know or there's some serious timey-wimey ball involved.

She didn't really know much of what happened outside her cell, too, as she was imprisoned for making a rebellion in the New Equestria, which my mother first made one thousand years ago, when the once good Princess Celestia turned evil after the staged death of her beloved protégé, Sunset Shimmer. Some rumours say that Celestia's own sister, Princess Luna, killed sunset, but that can't be true, as Princess Luna also loved Sunset Shimmer, and she turned into Nightmare Moon shortly after Celestia turned into Daybreaker, as she calls herself.

Huh. You just covered about a hundred thousand words (I guess it'd vary by the author, but I guess I'd need about as much to believably pull this off) in a single paragraph. This feels more like an outline than the actual story.

I also colour coded the words that are said.

Don't do this. Michael Ende pulled off the coloured text thing, but it not only looks amateurish, but also doesn't work for anyone, as different people use different backgrounds for reading fics (I use light grey and those yellow letters already blend in a bit, so I guess it's even worse with white background).

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This is a different Twilight (it always is).
This is a summary of all the past events. I wanted to do a prologue, but found it will be too long. I might do a prologue story (like Harry Potter and Fantastic Beasts), but, after thinking about it, I don't know where and how to start.
I deleted all traces of colour (should be).

My name is Twilight Sparkle, daughter of the current Princess Flurry Heart. This is my recount of my story.

I have yet to read the whole chapter, but this is quite an eye-catching line.

I have a 1000 word goal for each chapter, too. Nope. Not any more.

Also, it's good that you decided to ditch this goal. It may be fun to challenge yourself to such goals, but only if you have a reason. A chapter should be as long as it needs to be to convey all the necessary information in a reasonable way. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks. And, as you can see, I haven't added a new chapter in 2 months or so, as I wrote 5-7 paragraphs of the next chapter, and then stopped.

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Heh, I haven't updated my story in a year now because of the pandemic and everything around it, so just know it could be much worse. :twilightoops:

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I started my story because of the pandemic (actually, I joined this site during lockdown, after finishing the entire MLP series), and created the story because I had too many ideas, and wanted to make a huge crossover universe (many random ideas), with worlds that contain different paths, and one world gaining the ability to go to others (maybe this one).

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Cool. Sounds like a good idea for a series/anthology.

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I think it will be a series. As, for the final most important part of the story, someone dies, but that someone won't be in this story, and in another one. And, to go to another world, I should have context, and that means history, which either requires a few chapters in my current story, or a new one. I might just use one story for all my worlds, as I might just use 2 stories anyways. I don't think I can come up with too many story titles.

Also, to make a friend, you need to have at least one conversation with them, and probably know their name.

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