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Hearth's Warming is here again, just a few months after Twilight's coronation!

During these few months, Twilight has been overworking herself and has almost no time to spend with her friends outside of their monthly meetings.

Starlight wants to surprise Twilight on Hearth's Warming but needs something fresh, and thus she enlists Sunset Shimmer's help, to ask her how they celebrate Hearth's Warming on the other side. Sunset agrees to help, and they work together to make the perfect Hearth's Warming for Twilight.


This was written for Flashgen as a part of Jinglemas 2020! For more information about Jinglemas, checkout our group!

Art by Light262 on deviantart.

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was reading a fic about an evil badass twilight but this sound good in between two chapters
gonna add something once finished

first thing bad and probably the omly one, it's personal taste and don't change anything about my view of the story since there's no real influence and even permit this fic: Twilight is the only princess of equestria... not big thing, just don't like the idea of her being the sol princess of equestria wgile luna and celestia decide to retire like that. not a real problem, just me having a hard time with S9,

'nyway, it was sweet and everything so great work

and happy heartswarming to you

Awwwwww, this was disastrously cute.

“Won’t you be here for Hearth’s Warming Eve, at least?” Pinkie pouted, doing her best impression of a pleading puppy, including the head tilt.

Shouldn't this Pinkie say Christmas?

Great fic, just in time for the holidays.

All I can say is excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in this chapter. I greatly adored seeing Starlight and Sunset working together to set up a great Christmas/Hearth's Warming surprise for Twilight and definitely sympathized with the description of how busy Twilight's been since she took over for Celestia and Luna AND how busy the rest of the Mane Six and Spike ALSO were.

All in all, great one shot.

Happy Frieza Day!/Merry Christmas!

Took me a bit to get around to reading it, but thank you so much. I think the bit at the end from Twilight summarized exactly why I wanted to see these two in a fic together. Starlight and Sunset both showed how much people can change for the better, and it's why I really enjoyed their characters in the show/EqG.

Also it made for plenty of cute and funny moments, particular anytime the pony/human terminology got mixed up.

This was well done. Like Twilight, I think we could all use a break from the rest of the year.

I do have two small nitpicks about the story though. One, does the this version of the EG universe celebrate Christmas or Hearth's Warming? Sunset and Starlight's exchange near the middle seems to suggest the former, but every other mention of the EG holiday season suggests the latter. Two, I wish we could have seen more details on the process of bringing the party together. Granted, maybe not much happened between the planning and the end result.

Oh well. Good job on the story.

This was pretty sweet

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sorry 'bout that. To clarify,my intentions were for EqG to have Xmas, MLP to have Hearth's Warming. Unfortunately, when there's more than 3k words I tend to get confused about the terms, and plus I was writing it with a friend.

RDT

Sweet story! I really like how this story felt just like something that could be from the show itself.

I also noticed the mix-up of Hearth's Warming and Christmas. Heh. Who can blame Sunset when even the author can't keep it straight? :P

A review of this story has been completed, here!

Thank you for posting that it could be just the thing to give inspiration to someone who needs it! Keep up the great work!

walgreenslistens

Greetings, have a review!

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