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This... This was actually kinda interesting to read.
Will there be more to this? It could be interesting to read some chapters or stories, to see where he/she went from here, and if they even succeeded.

10563855 For now it's a one-shot.

now this is epic

Absolutely a high quality story. It's so ingrained in the mind rewrite fetish that the change focuses on the thoughts that pop up to resist the change are what's focused on by the change I always think the best way around that is opening the doors and letting it run riot. Really hits the spot.

Yes! Somepony remembered that humans are not fodder to be run over.
I would love to see a whole story of this.
One Convention, just one, and Queen Gibson would have enough soldiers/breeders/drones to overcome Chrysalis, no problem.

I'm going to asume this does not take place in the same world as queen rarity so theres no chance of a team up down the line against an evil queen chrysalis...at least bareing trans dimensional shinangians...*thinks about that* a damaged equivalent of super disidia.....with much chirping, queen shining, queen rarity, this lovely indavidual here, the PONI's all against a collection of multiversal villans.....


now i wana play a game like that...

10564092
So, Hyrule Warriors, but Pony Fanfic ‘verses instead?

Somebrony should start a gofundme...

I would love to see this flushed out into a full story of Gibson countering Chrysalis' invasion.

One of my more. . . weirder reads. But man, I couldn't read this without thinking this image.

i.ibb.co/f8PDZ9f/Wtf-FBI.png

But as far as the quality? 10/10, amazing my dude. One of those gems hidden in weird fetishes. Otherwise, keep on writing man!

Oh man, as soon as this is discovered, the entire world will be torn apart by witch hunts. No counter, no defense, only fear and desperation. Good times all around.

This could be the start of a wonderfully epic story.

10564824
Nope. But you bet your behind that is next on my reading list.

this is a grate story, to bade it is only a one shot.

we will free others like I was from the prisons this Chrysalis has built for them.

Would forming a coalition of ex-human queens be a wise move?

I like this. There isn't nearly enough TF art or stories.

Una

I'd love to read more of this. It was really good:heart:

Changing Perspective ==> Changeling Perspective :derpytongue2:

10568135 Both is good, but I got it right. :derpytongue2:

A moment later, as the skin around his belly and back hardened into chitin, a band of green broke up the black—circling around his belly. What shocked him was that he could see through it.

Is there any background/head-canon on why changelings have an translucent belly?

The pleasure spiked, and with it an orgasm rushed through him as the egg breached and his body pushed it out. He had just a moment to regain his senses when a second egg started its journey.

At least Catherine didn't bring in a male Changeling to fertilize the egg while it was still inside him, right?

That was the key, Gibson realized. They had made him half a changeling queen—not even that, maybe a quarter. Well, he was going to finish the job properly and become more.

Being a Queen is certainly better than being an egg maching.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Soon Chrysalis will have to deal with several human-queens starting to rebell against her.
(Assuming Gibson decides to let them become Queens, too. A proper Queen may have more fighting power, but may also be an (future) rival.)

Craigslist wasn't the best place, but he could have done worse.

Emphasis added, because he really couldn't (at least, not without straying beyond roomie-searching venues). Not because of the story events - it's because most roommate/housemate ads on craigslist are related to prostitution or sex trafficking. In my area (and probably most cities), the same messages are also spammed so heavily that it's impossible to find anyone actually looking for roomies.

10572667
Thanks for reminding me of this xkcdellence.

10573498 I imagine his message was the "**** GREAT DEAL SQUARE HOUSE DOOR IN FRONT!!! ****" one.

10566746
agree. et has potential

Never underestimate the determination of humanity...

KvAT #28 · Apr 18th, 2021 · · 1 ·

The mild mind-rewrite thing really feeds well to the HFY trope. Holy crap this is one beautiful one shot.

I for one, welcome our new changeling overlords, provided it's Gibson instead of Chrysalis.

Una

Would love to read a sequel to this story someday.

Great story. Would be an amazing story if there were more to it.

10806389 "Humans, Fuck Yeah!"

10806389
Humanity, Fuck Yeah. It's a concept where humans are greater than their sapient peers. The stories in HFY is usually about sci-fi intergalactic stuff or about fantasy stuff with elves and whatnot, but there are some stuff outside of the norm.

The concept is old, but the name HFY refers to the subreddit r/HFY, where a lot of people post stories with that central theme.

You have peaked my interest, please continue on this vein of thought and ideas.

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